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November Fall

Here comes anew, November fall Beneath blankets I wish to crawl, On this shy and young, early morn Bereft of leaves, a silent mourn Comes with a cool and breezy wind A blue, cloudless heaven is pinned. Here comes anew, November fall Out of bed, myself I must haul When winter in pajamas brings New year, cracking open his wings Soaring above capacious sky, The curtain to an end, he flies.
12/11/20 Lay November Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ Rhymezone

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Date: 12/9/2020 2:00:00 PM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. Good work. Congrats. Sara
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Carmael William
Date: 12/9/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara for taking the time to comment! Hugs sophia
Date: 12/2/2020 6:18:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Carmael (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 11/22/2020 12:12:00 PM
Wonderful. Love this.. hope you win. Pete.
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Carmael William
Date: 12/2/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank u :)
Date: 11/12/2020 8:49:00 AM
Nice imagery..
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Carmael William
Date: 11/13/2020 1:18:00 AM
:) thanks

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