November Fall

Here comes anew, November fall Beneath blankets I wish to crawl, On this shy and young, early morn Bereft of leaves, a silent mourn Comes with a cool and breezy wind A blue, cloudless heaven is pinned. Here comes anew, November fall Out of bed, myself I must haul When winter in pajamas brings New year, cracking open his wings Soaring above capacious sky, The curtain to an end, he flies.
12/11/20 Lay November Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/ Rhymezone
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Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:00 PM
I like the rhythm, rhyme and flow of this one. Good work. Congrats. Sara
William  Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 7:49 PM
Thank you so much Sara for taking the time to comment! Hugs sophia
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Carmael (forgive my misjudgment of the rules: 'aabbcc, aabbcc...' and not 'aabbcc, ddeeff...'), my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Dome Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Wonderful. Love this.. hope you win. Pete.
William  Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Thank u :)
One Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Nice imagery..
William  Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 1:18 AM
:) thanks
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