David Mohn Poet Sedoka

November Dreams

Autumn’s shivered eyes
closing over brittle tears;
deepened breath as winter calls.
Late November dreams
of summer’s fevered essence;
life bloomed green in lush bouquet.


07 Oct 2014
OCTOBER BLISS or NOVEMBER DREAMS/ Sijo or Sedoka - Poetry Contest

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Ravindra K Kapoor October 17, 2014 at 2:07 AM What a beautiful description of the changing seasons. Congrats on your well deserving win in Andreas contest. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun October 13, 2014 at 2:58 AM This is amazing! Big congrats on your well-deserved top win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Barbara Gorelick October 12, 2014 at 10:13 PM Wow! This is certainly deserving of top spot! Congrats. BG

Regina Mcintosh October 12, 2014 at 9:52 PM Congratulations and God bless you. Love and prayers, Gina

Joseph May October 12, 2014 at 12:54 PM Beautiful imagery....Congrats on a great win

John Lawless October 12, 2014 at 8:36 AM "closing over brittle tears" - brilliant visual poetry. Well deserved top spot, David

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 5:49 AM Congratulations on your top placing in Andrea's contest, David. This is a captivating sedoka which attracts by its vivid imagery. Well done. // paul

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 5:22 AM Congratulations on your first place win.

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:22 AM incredible imagery many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xxx

Mohan Chutani October 12, 2014 at 4:15 AM David, lovely summer green dreams in November. congrats.

Seren Roberts October 12, 2014 at 2:39 AM David this is truly lovely congrats ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:42 AM Congrats on the top place win, david

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:16 AM wow, this is incredible imagery and very smart writing, David. I love how you ended with the dream of summer. This is my dream in November as well. Congrats for being a top place winner. I hope more people will now view your poem!!