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November Dreams

Autumn’s shivered eyes closing over brittle tears; deepened breath as winter calls. Late November dreams of summer’s fevered essence; life bloomed green in lush bouquet. 07 Oct 2014 OCTOBER BLISS or NOVEMBER DREAMS/ Sijo or Sedoka - Poetry Contest

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/17/2014 2:07:00 AM

What a beautiful description of the changing seasons. Congrats on your well deserving win in Andreas contest. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2014 2:58:00 AM

This is amazing! Big congrats on your well-deserved top win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/12/2014 10:13:00 PM

Wow! This is certainly deserving of top spot! Congrats. BG

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/12/2014 9:52:00 PM

Congratulations and God bless you. Love and prayers, Gina

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2014 12:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery....Congrats on a great win

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:36:00 AM

"closing over brittle tears" - brilliant visual poetry. Well deserved top spot, David

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your top placing in Andrea's contest, David. This is a captivating sedoka which attracts by its vivid imagery. Well done. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:22:00 AM

incredible imagery many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/12/2014 4:15:00 AM

David, lovely summer green dreams in November. congrats.

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/12/2014 2:39:00 AM

David this is truly lovely congrats ....Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 1:42:00 AM

Congrats on the top place win, david

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:16:00 AM

wow, this is incredible imagery and very smart writing, David. I love how you ended with the dream of summer. This is my dream in November as well. Congrats for being a top place winner. I hope more people will now view your poem!!