November Dreams


Gold-brown crunchy leaves
Crystal beads of morning frost
Smoke swirling from chimney tops
Time for family
Oven filled with bird and pie-
Harvest time of food and love


October 7, 2014

~1st Place~
Contest: Best Sedoka 577-577
Sponsor: Lu Loo
Judged: 06/10/2019

~3rd Place~
Contest: November Dreams - Sedoka
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Judged: 10/12/2014
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Alex Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 3:26 PM
I see your favorite holiday sedoka garnered another win. congrats, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:30 PM
Yes! Thanks again for my placement way back in 2014! Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 1:47 PM
- A beautiful poem, Sandra :) - Congratulations on your winning poem 2019 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you again, Anne-Lise! Hugs, Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 10:20 PM
Very nice Sandra..The oven filled with bird and pie I especially like .Congrats. BG
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 12:13 PM
Hi Barbara, thank you so much. Nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Callus Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:21 AM
Really enjoyed your sedoka, Sandra. Loved the smoke swirling from chimney tops and the family at table. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Thank you, Paul. Thanksgiving is my first thought when I think of November. Thank you for your nice comment and congratulations. Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 6:05 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win with this little gem.
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Maurice, thank you for your congratulations on my poem. Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:27 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Sandra:-) hugs Jan xxx
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. Hugs to you. Sandra
Mehta Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:50 AM
Nice dreams of November, Sandra, congrats on the win
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram. November will soon be more than a dream -- its reality is just around the corner. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 12:26 AM
This one is so homey!! I think you are the only one who got into the idea of Thanksgiving holiday and I really liked that. Congrats on a great win in my contest.
Haight Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Andrea, for your comment and congratulations. It happens to be my favorite holiday, so the idea came so naturally. It was a honor to place in your contest. Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 1:45 PM
This a marvelous Sedoka, Andrea should love this. Good luck in her contest.
Haight Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Maurice, thanks so much for your nice comment on my poem! Sandra P.S. Sorry - I fixed my typo!! :(
Austin Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Hi, Sandra. Delicious stuff. Enjoyed. Love, daver
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much, Daver. Sandra
May Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Lovely write Sandra
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Thank you for your supportive comment, Joseph. Sandra
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Your delightful poem fits the title Sandra. November dreams is a nice title. I just love November for three very important reasons: first is my birth month, second is in the fall, and third because of our Thanksgiving Day holiday here at home in the USA. Good luck in the contest! Love. xxxx D.
Haight Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Thank you once again, Dorian! Yes, November is one of my favorites too. Sandra
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Simply delightful Sandra...Your descriptions are vibrant....hugs Tim
Haight Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Thank you so much, Tim. I really appreciate your encouragement. Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:46 PM
This weekend I will have bird and pie and can't wait now that I've read this beautiful poem Sandra. Lovely images for November.
Haight Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:43 PM
Hi Brenda -- Wow...an extra 'Thanksgiving' for you! Enjoy! And thanks once again for your supportive comment. Sanddra
Smith Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Can I come over? :)
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 3:22 PM
wonderful imagery Sandra:-) ooh I feel hungry for turkey and pie mmmmm Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
Haight Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 7:45 PM
Thanks, Jan. Yes, that special day will be here before we know it! Thanks again for your nice comment and good wishes. Sandra
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