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November Dreams

The November fog Lifts to reveal reddish hues As the leaves fall gracefully Showing artistry Conveyed with aplomb and with skill By Monet, painting for sale Dated 7 November 2014

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/12/2014 8:53:00 PM

Do you accept airmiles?

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/16/2014 6:38:00 PM

lol thought u would say green shield stamps .....rofl Seren

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/12/2014 7:05:00 PM

How much?

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 7:54:00 PM

Like me it's priceless lol.....

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2014 5:40:00 PM

Wonderful and beautiful piece,Seren...Congrats on your win...

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 7:54:00 PM

Thank you so much. ....Seren

Tim Smith

Date: 10/12/2014 12:36:00 PM

Congrats Seren...were your ears ringing last night I was with a fellow Welsh last night at an art event...Gareth Troake

Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 1:16:00 PM

It's all my brain cell could come up with :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:14:00 PM

thanks for that little white lie....Seren

Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 1:11:00 PM

I'm not sure where but just said you were a fabulous poet :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:08:00 PM

from where in Wales Tim, wonder what you said about me rofl..Seren

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 7:26:00 AM

Beautiful painting, Seren! The main difference between nature and Monet is the price! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:09:00 PM

thank you Paul, wasnt sure when I wrote it if it would be ok...Seren

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:42:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:28:00 AM

Nice scene worded well, Seren, congrats on the win

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:09:00 PM

Thanks Ram much appreciated ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:53:00 AM

That was sure interesting how it ended up a Monet! The next to last line was off on syllable count, but Soup's counter said it was ok. I did a blog about it. If you are using that counter of Soup's, it is not a good one. the one Nette shows us is better. Anyway, I really enjoyed your poem, dear. Congrats in my contest.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:12:00 PM

ok will note the syllable counter, I double checked mine to be sure as well. Well Andrea I think Monet is one of the famous artist of nature... hoped you would like how I linked it Thank you ....Seren

Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 12:30:00 PM

I used it for my It's essence entry...so I thought it was right..luckily Jan caught it that the count was off..I won't be using the one on the soup anymore

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/9/2014 3:40:00 AM

Very pretty pic painted with words, Seren! Enjoyed it! I liked your dreamy approach. I love Monet, is a pity that his paintings are out of my range in this sale you mentioned here. ;) Good luck in the contest! Xxxx D.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/12/2014 1:13:00 PM

Thank you Dorian, yes its a case of look but not touch with these famous pieces of work...Seren