Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- November -

Daylight change, and go to its winter rest
Night frost drips from the eaves

A cold wind rushed and shoveled his way
Caught your lungs with clear icy air

In this deep cold, it feels just right
Leave the door open to be a part of the season

Human rhythms always searching
The lunar takes its own bath in silver dust

November night will show you: The Milky Way
Keep your senses and soul awake, and enjoy it










  08.11.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
- (unrhymed couplets)
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Ovidiu Bocsa November 30, 2016 at 5:00 AM Serenity and a noble soul a bit touched by melancoly.The poem may be sung and it reminds me of the warm voice of Harry Belafonte: Hans without you, September comes...I let open the door for that feeling. Beyond the clear icy air, the moon of the poets taking a bath in silver dust, between reality and sweet reveries the noble soul is awaken.

Janet Grace November 25, 2016 at 8:48 AM Seasonal poems are favorites of mine and I have written quite a few which makes me even more appreciative of the NOVEMBER poem by you. The attached picture is very impressive too. Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2016 at 3:09 PM - Thanks for nice visit and valuable comments, Janet - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter November 18, 2016 at 12:54 PM Wonderful piece Anne- Lise!:)Beautifully painted unrhymed couplets in this November poem, dear friend.Fantastic imagery!:)Just awesome!A 7!Sending you my love n' prayers.Best to you always too!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always !:)Hugs!D Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2016 at 12:57 PM - Thank you for your lovely comments a 7 and friendly visit, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cona Adams November 15, 2016 at 12:52 PM Beautifully written and illustrated. Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2016 at 12:57 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comments on my poem, Cona :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid November 14, 2016 at 7:32 AM november brings the dark moon as the nights grow longer passing you a warm smile beautifully painted anne lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2016 at 12:56 PM - Greatly appreciate your your visit and nice comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray November 10, 2016 at 11:25 AM Leave the door open?? No way!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2016 at 1:46 PM - I do not like socks ... I always go barefoot, close the door :))) Jean Murray November 10, 2016 at 1:31 PM That's OK then Anne-Lise. I like to keep a nice 25 degree inside at all times. If there was a mass exodus from the house, I used to shout "Paratroupers" to my children, to remind them they must not dally in the doorway. (Mad mother me). Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2016 at 11:41 AM - .... I write about the heart door .... :)))- Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam November 10, 2016 at 2:20 AM Excellent. Great imagery and lovely write my friend. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2016 at 11:41 AM - Ravi, thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley November 9, 2016 at 11:34 PM 'A cold wind rushed and shovelled'- love that line, the cutting wind indeed does dig and sift through every cranny. A lovely, crisp, fresh write, Anne-Lise, love it. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2016 at 11:42 AM - Thank you Viv, for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan November 9, 2016 at 10:49 AM So lovely...Great imagery...I have never seen snow in my life... Loved your description... Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 2:11 PM - I will send you a bucket full of snow, Supraja :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Augustus Black November 9, 2016 at 7:29 AM I got the feelings that you write from profoundest part of your heart. This is very clean and imaginable write. I like rhythm of this one and the hug of nature throughout this write. Well done. 7 Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 8:25 AM - I always write from my heart, Augustus :) - Winter is beautiful, but I do not like being cold :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 9, 2016 at 7:26 AM November in North countries is a month of great changes as it paves the way for winter! Beautiful verses and rose! Excellent work dear, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 8:22 AM - Can I stay at your roof garden until spring arrives, I will remember to water the flowers every day :)) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 9, 2016 at 3:26 AM you awakened my senses with your wonderful imagery in these delightful couplets Anne Lise ... its starting to get wintery here and I confess my thermal vest has finally seen the light of day lol:-( I hate being cold:-( hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 8:19 AM - No pink silk underwear with white lace .... wool (big size !) in November, Jan !!! - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2016 at 3:21 AM Beautiful and splendid:) you placed a lovely smile on my face:) thank you, Anne:) enjoy November:) Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 8:14 AM - I live and breathe for the spring and summer, Jo ... during the winter I freeze and forget to breathe :))) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf November 8, 2016 at 7:43 PM A lovely November poem, I love it because it means summer is around the corner. Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2016 at 3:33 AM - Several long, dark and cold months in the future ... I'm afraid ... Norway's cold, Rick - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith November 8, 2016 at 2:44 PM It is a beautiful month...nice poem and pic A-L Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2016 at 2:58 PM - Tim, thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 8, 2016 at 2:34 PM A beautiful gathering of poetic couplets inspired by the month of November. I could feel the chill in the air and the scent of a fireplace bellowing it's smoke through the chimney in your wonderful words, sadly it is still quite warm where I live and fall is not around the corner. But with your poem I can certainly dream that it is. Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2016 at 2:58 PM - The images of winter is really beautiful, Chris ... but, it's too cold ... - I guess I was born in a wrong country :) - Thank you for your lovely comments and friendly visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)