November

Need more blankets on my bed
Orange sun not warm but it’s bright
Very cheerful is a bird, guess he’s fed
Eating his wormy meal under blue sky
Made myself a fruity breakfast at seven
Breakfast was a ripe juicy cantaloupe 
Early isn’t my time, yet I’m in heaven 
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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:47 PM
Dear Karen, your acrostic poem is wonderful. I especially liked “need more blankets on my bed”, it captures the coolness of November and sets a cozy mood for the rest of your heartwarming poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:58 PM
You are kind Susan! Thank you!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 4:50 PM
a delightful read!
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Thanks!
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 12:29 PM
Wonderful poem! A favorite read!
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Abdullah! I’m honored!
Poet Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Well-composed poem with a light air like the weekend. I don't like cold weather too, and it's already freezing. I need another blanket on my bed too.
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Stay warm dear Sotto and have a blessed Sunday! Hugs
Anaya Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 1:38 PM
Ha, first line made me smile. I'm in thicker PJ's, no blankets yet! Ah sweet ending my friend November blessings~xhugs
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Glad you smiled Anaya! I live in a fluffy housecoat on top of pjs! November blessings returned! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 12:20 PM
- "Early is not my time" either :))) - We already have frost at night ... many blankets are needed ... winter is really not my time :) - Lovely breakfast for birds ... and humans, Karen :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 1:40 PM
Hugs Anne-Lise and thanks for reading!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:53 AM
I enjoyed reading your "November" Acrostic write. A Great Month... "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 1:39 PM
Hi Paula! Not for contest just for fun. Have a fabulous weekend!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Aww…love this write! You had a fruity breakfast. I had low sugar oatmeal with milk. Working on a pack of steroids so trying to eat right as I get better! Will see pain clinic soon. My leg has been so painful. Glad you’re up early this morning. Me too. I was up at 6:00.
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Good morning Kim! I didn’t know you were sick. When it’s cold or raining occasionally I ache in my legs and hands. Lupus is why I think. Do take care of yourself. Yea those steroids are no joke! Are you a morning person? I’m usually not lol but up with the birds today!
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