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...carries the wilted weight of autumn in its broken beauty with fields of brown stalks, unharvested pumpkins that rest like mislaid dreams patient where they are November, detached from the moorings of green when golden leaves, sparse, cleave to skein branches to thwart the creep of cold the leaf brown baggage below curls at its edges like fickle affection and yet, the busy abundance of harvest foretell platters of gratitude Thanksgiving a mix of deliverance and charisma tangible like the elation of coming home month of nocturnal stabs of frost bring foliage to weeping L i s t e n L i s t e n to what murmurs beneath half frozen furrows fields that know what pushes through seasonal loss radical roots stored in darkness a spring-to-come growth thronged with voices that never lay far below the surface Poem written November 6th, 2022

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Date: 1/19/2023 8:02:00 PM
Ooooh! I missed this one! gorgeous phrases starting from that very first line … the brown stalks and brown baggage sometimes get to me but so classic for that time of year.. the pumpkins! Enjoyed immensely:))
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/19/2023 8:36:00 PM
Greetings Susan, my appreciation for your affirmative view of my poem. "November" is one of my postings that I am truly contented with - others, not so much. Be well. Regards always, Brian
Date: 12/31/2022 12:36:00 PM
Just amazing … it’s subtleties and sheer power . Mother Nature and November described in such intimate depth . Delicious and raw … lonely and hopeful all in one . A fav for me . Belated congratulations on being the number one poem on best new poems Brian . Happy healthy 3023 to you ! Susan :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/31/2022 1:08:00 PM
Hello Susan, Thank you most sincerely for your gracious, insightful comments regarding my poem. I was most surprised by such a placing for in other contests my ranking was lower on the list of favorites. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 12/25/2022 11:59:00 PM
A lovely November poem. Well done.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/26/2022 6:40:00 AM
Thank you. Best wishes. Brian
Date: 12/24/2022 7:15:00 PM
Great descriptions. For one who dreads that time of year, this is inspiring.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/24/2022 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Juliet, for your positive note. For me, November has a stark beauty as it waits for the first blowing snows of December. All the best, Brian
Date: 12/23/2022 8:38:00 AM
I have been mostly absent during November Brian, took a little time out for World Cup soccer, and am sorry I missed this brilliant piece of free verse poetry, with voices never far below the surface, an exceptional stand out line amongst many, and absolutely deserving of number one on the top new poems list, have a great Christmas, cheers David
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/23/2022 8:56:00 AM
Greetings David, that final in the World Cup was remarkable in athleticism + skill. Thank you for the exceptionally kind acknowledgement of my poem. Best wishes for a grand holiday season. Be well. Brian
Date: 11/27/2022 8:34:00 AM
WoW. What an amazing poem, this is FREE VERSE . A Fave for me.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/27/2022 2:47:00 PM
So very thoughtful of you to drop by + comment favorably, Andrea. I hope that you are well. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 11/26/2022 9:42:00 PM
"the leaf brown baggage below curls at its edges like fickle affection" What a great simile! November is a busy month full of the harvest bounty. This poem beautifully captures another dimension in the natural cycles of the seasons. Very well done, my friend! Be well, Thomas
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/27/2022 7:04:00 AM
My appreciation, Thomas, for your uplifting evaluation of my November poem. You are quite right that the month is crowded with change, transition, celebration. Your insights make for good days. All the best to you + your family. Cheers, Brian
Date: 11/25/2022 4:39:00 AM
Yes so much going on in November, Brian, and all that laying just below the surface. Excellent poetry, love your imagery. Harry
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/25/2022 6:16:00 AM
Hello Harry, November yields its images. I'm just the scribe. I hope that all is well with you. My sincere appreciation for your stop by + affirmative comment. Cheers, Brian
Date: 11/23/2022 1:53:00 PM
Dear Brian, I’m am deeply moved by your exquisite and intimate portrayal of November. The magic of your verse stirs the embers of my imagination to flare with visions of “unharvested pumpkins that rest like mislaid dreams” - Wow! Your brilliant soulful imagery brings me to the center of the moment, to listen to the “murmurs beneath half frozen burrows” as I stand transfixed in the “fields of brown stalks”. Your rich textured artistry and the mood created is breathtaking. I feel so many emotions. A fav! The Thanksgiving stanza makes a warm, bright and cozy contrast to the bleak “broken beauty” of November’s “nocturnal stabs of frost”. Simply awe-inspiring poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/23/2022 3:03:00 PM
My goodness, Susan, thank you's seem insufficient to acknowledge your detailed + thoughtful appraisal of my poem. Sometimes images of transition in a month bridging seasons can move one's pen. Your comments are truly valued. Sincerest good wishes, Brian
Date: 11/22/2022 11:39:00 AM
hello brian, this is brilliant free verse written in your unique signature style (knocks any nonet out of the ball park!) i thoroughly enjoyed this one
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/22/2022 7:11:00 PM
Many thanks, Charlotte. Your approval means much as I value your body of work immensely. Look after yourself + take the time to heal. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 11/22/2022 5:33:00 AM
Just a superb piece of poetry Brian. I was there walking, breathing and seeing all as I read. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/22/2022 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Gary, for your read of my posting + supportive note. As always, your words are a tonic of encouragement. I hope all is well with you. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 10:07:00 PM
So many wonderful lines here, I can't choose! Pumpkins like mislaid dreams resonates with me; I've always felt a little sorry for them, deserted. The half-frozen furrows- I feel them beneath my feet! Elizabeth
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/12/2022 6:44:00 AM
Hello Elizabeth, Thank you for the affirmative message. Yes, abandoned pumpkins in November fields do stir a sense of loss + waste in those who catch that orange rump vista. Be well. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 5:09:00 AM
Brian, you captured so many fine qualities of November in your fine poetic verses. Congratulations on your win but I think it deserved higher billing.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/11/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna, for your most thoughtful appraisal of my poem. I am delightfully surprised if I make an evaluator's list as my free verse lines (to some) stretch credibility. Sometimes subject matter + word choice don't grab the evaluator's imagination. However, your words are most encouraging. Sincerest regards, Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Brian. You amply deserve it with your wonderful poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/11/2022 6:29:00 AM
I hope that all is well with you this November + always. Thank you for the most supportive words to stir one's pen. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 3:19:00 AM
- Described so beautifully in your words, Brian :) - Congratulations on your win -
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/11/2022 6:30:00 AM
Very appreciative of your congratulatory remarks. Thank you. Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 12:22:00 AM
"unharvested pumpkins that rest like mislaid dreams" - wow what a comparison! Entire poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/11/2022 6:21:00 AM
Greetings Christuraj, Your stop by + comment bring light to this overcast November day. My sincere thanks. Brian
Date: 11/11/2022 12:01:00 AM
Echoes of Grace! Beauty fills this page. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/11/2022 6:17:00 AM
My appreciation, Gina, for placing my piece among your contest winners. Be well dear lady. Brian
Date: 11/8/2022 11:15:00 AM
This is so lovely, Brian. "unharvested pumpkins that rest like mislaid dreams... I love it! Best of luck in contest.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/8/2022 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Ann. I appreciate sincerely, your thoughtful, supportive message on my submission. Be well. Brian
Date: 11/6/2022 9:18:00 PM
I really like this one, Brian. You've painted a marvelous word picture of this time of the year. BofL in the contest.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 11/7/2022 5:25:00 AM
Greetings Milton, I hope all is well with you. Maybe some revision here to link stanza 3 to 4 without such a shift that jars somewhat. Many thanks for your affirmative note. Sincerest regards, Brian

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