Notes About The Poem

November

Autumn light of day ripples through
Embracing shadows shade of blue.

October's breath blessed November
Hues with warm scarlet and amber. 

Underneath spun amorous scene
Of sweet scent tease, forgotten green. 

Thanksgiving's feast aromas drew, 
All appetizing wafting through. 

Folks exchange fun gentle banter, 
Past Thanksgivings they remember. 

Hearts beat brimming in smiles serene,
For all that might frost have been seen.


11/19/2020


Lay November Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: William Kekaula
How Many Syllables
6-lines per stanza,
rhyming scheme of aabbcc, aabbcc
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Thomas Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 6:08 AM
I don't celebrate holidays but this is a very warming write Eve :) And my anniversary is in November lol.
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 7:01 AM
Thank you and bless you and your beautiful family. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 6:26 AM
Congrats on your winner. Way to go with remembering that first Thanksgiving. Sara
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:56 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Eve, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:09 PM
this is a lovely lay you wrote with its focus on the BEST part of November!!
Daniel Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 2:03 AM
Lovely picturesque poem, Eve:)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Photo unnecessary, your word pictures were spot on. Happy almost Thanksgiving Eve!
One Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 6:18 AM
This is so lovely my friend... You painted your own picture here through your words..
Buhagiar Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 1:33 AM
A lovely lay on November which will soon end. Best for a win.~~
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