Nothing Seems Out of Place


Today,
nothing seems out of place.
The river is at ease between
its banks, those four swans
are meant to be there,
suddenly emerging 
from the shadows beneath
the bridge and into a bright 
arena of sunlight.

And along the path,
an old, bone worn retriever 
is taking its honored place
in the morning, waddling
slowly on a slack, patient lead,
unhurried in the hands
of someone who loves her.

Assembled too in their given
places, a row of peppercorn trees,
a children's playground
and the big, rusty barrel 
of a naval gun pointing out
over the bay as it has done
for a hundred years
primed with peace,

and my shadow finding
its usual place to rest, 
the ground accommodating 
that familiar shape as it does
to a friend. There are times
when nothing seems
out of place and it would be
easy to believe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/23/2024 7:01:00 AM
and there is nothing out of place with this poem....except perhaps...a FAVE....a masterfully executed poetic stroll through a timeless moment....
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/1/2024 3:56:00 AM
Yr words mean a lot my friend....savored with gratitude. Many thanks John....cheers, Paul
Date: 9/23/2024 6:26:00 AM
Hello Paul, Ohhh those rare, beautiful moments when everything in our surroundings seems to align perfectly, creating a sense of peace and rightness in the world. I think that more should see the beauty in the world then is currently seen. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/1/2024 3:54:00 AM
Probably much depends on making time and training the mind to observe those moments...I thank you Daniel for yr kind words. Cheers, Paul
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