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I have nothing left eye see only right nothing but fright caravan of republicans torches in the night Liberty stolen blinded in flight

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Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2018 2:21:00 PM

Powerfully penned so many interpretations of the meaning of your words Arthur and the pic is it a Phoenix rising from the ashes I wonder! My captcha is why! Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2018 5:40:00 PM

potent work with allusion to the dimming of real freedom for mankind... hail, art!...huggs

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/8/2018 3:31:00 PM

Strong write, arthur.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/8/2018 1:00:00 PM

The reader can sense your angst so well in this poem, Arthur, and your fear of that caravan. You picked a striking image to match your words and it's almost like you are the bird in the photo. Awesome writing, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Joseph May

Date: 11/8/2018 8:15:00 AM

A sad state of affairs Arthur..Powerful write..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/8/2018 7:30:00 AM

Bleak and potent ink, x

Tim Smith

Date: 11/8/2018 4:18:00 AM

Keep your head on a swivel