Nothing Lasts Forever

When distance circles the shoreline Painfully , a numb breeze decries How our lackluster glance mirrors Frail changing of hesitant eyes. Across night’s starkly blunt edges Fondness dangles like threadbare reeds; Knowing warmth is not forever When moonless summer’s rapture bleeds. ~ My spirit homeless now admits, This fleeting affair… love resists. 10 Lines, 5 Words: Rhyme II Sponsor: Laura Loo 1/17/2018

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Date: 1/21/2018 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well done.
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:39:00 PM
what a beautiful poem Nette, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2018 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 1/20/2018 3:06:00 PM
Indeed a pleasure to read! Congratulations on your win Nette! Best forever wishes... Mick
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Date: 1/20/2018 10:54:00 AM
can't get more beautiful than this sweet Nette, congrats and thank you! :)-luloo
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Date: 1/17/2018 1:07:00 PM
You did this challenge very well..
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Date: 1/17/2018 10:28:00 AM
Lovely expression, Nette though sad to face sometimes. Enjoy what we have while we have it xxoo Good Luck
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Date: 1/16/2018 10:37:00 PM
Ah but there is a wee part of me wish it did! a dreamer, loved this poem!
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Date: 1/16/2018 5:59:00 PM
When distance circles the shoreline...brilliant line, wonderful poem...good luck
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Date: 1/16/2018 4:36:00 PM
Only your beautiful poetry seems eternal, nette..
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:49:00 PM
I love the line..when moonless summer rapture bleeds. I've always found your pairing of words to be intriguing, Nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:37:00 PM
Lovely articulate words decorate your poem..very articulate..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:37:00 PM
so utterly beautiful, Nette, particularly the line: Fondness dangles like threadbare reeds. Wow!!
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:37:00 PM
There is something about summer flings that can't be ever after. Incredible work capturing moments ephemeral!
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:14:00 PM
- Loves the last line, Nette - Beautiful - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2018 3:04:00 PM
Nice lines you have in this poem, Nette. Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest :)
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