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You knelt, and from a bended knee offered me an engagement ring. Then you asked, "will you marry me?" and my heart just wanted to sing. You'd chosen a gorgeous spring day, to launch the best surprise ever. But, the ring fell and rolled away down a storm drain, gone forever. The look on your face was painful, for I saw the tears start to swell. And although chances were doubtful you began searching where it fell. Don't let this leave you in tatters, the ring’s gone, but I still have you. Believe me, nothing else matters there’s naught that anyone can do. I remember how great it felt, when you slipped it on my finger. And when playing the cards fate dealt, those are the feelings that linger. Mar. 12, 2019

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Date: 3/22/2019 8:20:00 PM
aww what a sad tale of the ring but love can survive disasters like this :-) many congrats Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2019 8:33:00 PM
Thanks Jan, as always your support is much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2019 4:47:00 PM
Emile, thank you for entering my contest. You had clear and fascinating imagery and great rhythm and flow..Congratulations on your 3rd place win. . Come and visit me on my blog https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=35331&PoetID=57242
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Date: 3/22/2019 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate the opportunity to participate my friend, Emile.

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