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Windswept makeshift shelter Huddled in dark corners Where blue-grey spirals beckon Memories triggered Jeans fade to blazer and tie And a JPS cigarette behind the bike sheds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/21/2011 8:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Jemmy. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 12/26/2011 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Carol, blessings for 2012 my friend xx
Date: 12/21/2011 6:12:00 AM
Bucking society as a teen, as an adult; you capture that succinctly so well. Yes, smokers now get segregated into designated well aerated areas. What changed is, the rest of us don't have to suck it up.
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:16:00 AM
True but I was seeing it from the eye of that rebel teen of cough choke (must pack up the ciggies) years ago, it feels very similar. Thank you John

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