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flowing-pen writer of poetry beautiful verses and rhymes that tell stories that drip from my pen from the depth of my soul I will create picking carefully my words and then all my effort adds up to nothing no way nada not in this life fat chance perish the thought forget it no prize for you nil zilch zero nothing the nothingness overwhelms me with sadness my poem may seem a trifle thing that dripped from my pen from the depth of my soul I wrote it picking carefully my words and then for a moment and just for a second I feel unimportant insignificant nothing the rejection overwhelms me with sorrow worthless and then I think not no way I refuse I will not be nope I will and I can NOTHING will stop me from being the poet God himself set into motion nothing will deter my purpose that is- to write from the depth of my soul never for nothing but always and forever for me ______________________________ September 17, 2015 Free Verse For the contest, Nothing, sponsor, Anthony Slausen Seventh Place

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Date: 9/24/2015 11:40:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win... SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2015 10:42:00 AM
Congratulations Broken, WOW... LINDA
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Date: 9/21/2015 2:31:00 AM
Very lovely n touching write broken, congrats on great win!
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Date: 9/20/2015 1:53:00 PM
when your greatest passion is writing, nothing can keep you from pursuing it, constance... sweet congrats!
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Date: 9/20/2015 11:34:00 AM
Really enjoyed your interpretation of the theme and the way you presented it. Congrats, Broken!
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Date: 9/20/2015 10:56:00 AM
Congrats Broken, good job :)
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Date: 9/20/2015 10:05:00 AM
Broken, congratulations on your win! I enjoyed your interpretation of nothing. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/20/2015 9:23:00 AM
BW, congratulation on your win in the"Nothing" contest. This was a well penned write:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/18/2015 7:28:00 PM
What a very beautiful write BW... I love it flows..... Good luck in the contest........A.M.
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Date: 9/17/2015 9:15:00 PM
Excellent, BW, I love this. I really love the last two lines. rjijr
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