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Notes on jailbreak

Ok, there’s no jailbreak.
Make room for my innocent alter ego,
because there’s nothing to rebel against.

There are zero classes in my nascent,
year-long, Harvard master’s degree.
They call it ‘self directed study’
and like rockets have stages,
I’ll have ‘self paced modules.’

Am I suddenly at Oxford University?
They’re quite famous for that (no formal classes).
Or am I suddenly grown up and trusted?
I obviously don’t have it all figured out yet,
so I’ll just trust the process.

When I started that other school
(that shall not be named), my advisor
handed me a computer printout - a list
with something like 40 courses on it.
I thought, “Oh, my God,” but one by one,
year over year, I checked-off those courses
and walla! They handed me a diploma.
It was a process.

I understand, if you’re disappointed about the jailbreak, but there’ll
be coffee breaks, lunch breaks, study breaks, bathroom breaks
and more than a few self-directed dance breaks. So stick around.

“You know,” my therapist said, so very seriously, a few years ago,
“you keep laughing,”
.
.
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Fallica Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:31 AM
That’s what my son said Carnegie Mellon was like after teaching for a year. His advisor told him, “This is something we don’t understand”. It was up to him to figure out and learn whatever discipline or sub-field of knowledge he needed to learn to do it. It took him four years, and he had the all the resources of CMU to do it. When he finished, it did feel a bit like a jailbreak. I’m sure Peter knows.
Vionet Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 5:56 PM
It sounds like he and Peter could mumbo jumbo together. =]
Fallica Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:57 AM
Anais, His dissertation was on 'Lattice Quantum Chromodynamics'. . . I understood every single word!! . . None of the sentences. ;-)
Vionet Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:42 AM
What was your son studying? I think it'll be interesting. I'm a bit obsessive so, we'll see. =]
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Loving all the breaks…lol
Vionet Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 4:43 AM
=] Thanks.
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