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Not Yet, My Love

When I am not within your reach
do you say my name out loud?
Does it escape your lips ending in breathless sighs?
Would goosebumps rise on my bare skin
from the look of desire, I'd find in your eyes?

Don't hesitate at the crossroads we've reached.
It's far too late now to take another detour.
Run with me to the edge of that cliff
and don't bother thinking about 'what if?'
Take my hand and jump into the shadows 
of the deep abyss we've been digging
ever since we shared our first sensuous kiss.

If there is pain, it will hold sweet agony
and only end when the rhythmic beat
of my heart slows for a night of rest.
When the breath you stole from me
returns with some semblance of normalcy.

That will be the moment you whisper, "I love you"
and my reply will be given with a flirtatious smile...
"Not yet, my love, not yet, but you will.
There is so much more for us to feel."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fowler Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 9:54 AM
Romantic and sensuous Lin. I especially love the "Run with me to the edge of that cliff and don't bother thinking about 'what if?'" A sexy write. :)
Lane Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Linda... grateful you see it as I do.
M  Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Whoooa what a beautiful romantic write ….love the ending! Lovely Lin….you have such a romantic heart my friend! Debx
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thank you, Deb and that heart gets me into trouble some times. I'd rather it love than be stone cold.
Rodgers Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Dear Lin, your poem whisked me away on a whirlwind of passionate journey! I could almost feel the goosebumps rise. The image of running towards the cliff's edge, hand in hand, is both exhilarating and terrifying, perfectly capturing the intoxicating mix of risk and reward in surrendering to love's pull. The ending, oh, that playful tease! "Not yet," you whisper, leaving us breathless with anticipation, eager to dive deeper into the abyss. A truly captivating poem! - Blessings, Daniel
Lane Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I'm so delighted that you felt the exhilaration, the danger and the devil-may-care lustful feeling of the moment, Daniel. You caught the exact emotion I wanted a reader to feel with her tease at the end. I wanted to know what happened next, too. To write a poem that captivates a reader's attention is the best compliment I could ever receive. Thank you so sincerely.
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