Not Us!! No Way!

the silvery shivers were something new
I hoped and wondered if you felt it too
there were so many words I wanted to say
and then I heard.. Not US! NO WAY!

you kissed my lips and held my hand
I wanted to claim you and move on with my plan
I prayed "I love you" is what you would say
but instead  you uttered Not US! NO WAY!

be my best friend you asked with a smile
never seeing my evil plot to bequile
and make a trip up the aisle some day
as everyone screams NOT THEM! NO WAY!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 24, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Wow, so it seems people feel like friends may not be able to handle the two together,,, I see no problem with it lol,,, it shouldn't be "NOT THEM! NO WAY!",, it should be "ONLY THEM! ALWAYS!" sometimes you never expect it but more could evolve with a simple friendship lol.... loved your write:)...P.D.
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June 24, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Wonder how it worked out..Looking for forward to many more writes from your pen.Sara
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