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Not Us!! No Way!

the silvery shivers were something new I hoped and wondered if you felt it too there were so many words I wanted to say and then I heard.. Not US! NO WAY! you kissed my lips and held my hand I wanted to claim you and move on with my plan I prayed "I love you" is what you would say but instead you uttered Not US! NO WAY! be my best friend you asked with a smile never seeing my evil plot to bequile and make a trip up the aisle some day as everyone screams NOT THEM! NO WAY!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 5:14:00 PM
Wow, so it seems people feel like friends may not be able to handle the two together,,, I see no problem with it lol,,, it shouldn't be "NOT THEM! NO WAY!",, it should be "ONLY THEM! ALWAYS!" sometimes you never expect it but more could evolve with a simple friendship lol.... loved your write:)...P.D.
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Date: 6/24/2010 12:56:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Wonder how it worked out..Looking for forward to many more writes from your pen.Sara
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