Not Tuned In

Aye, let me say
It's not what ya think bout me,
For I'll always be that, just me!

Holler if ya want to,
I'm not listening,
For I'm not tuned in!

Turn up the volume all ya want to,
I still don't feel the lousy heat,
I'm over you, over that too!

Want to tell me a story
All about me?
I know me well and I do ME well.

What else to add to your false alarm,
Like a clock going off
When it's not supposed to?

What do you gain from your strife?
Does it make you into a hero,
Locked in like a club sandwich?

How large is your bite
Shedding dirt like a mite,
Pieces flying all over - air, land and sea?

You got that right, It's not what ya say
And it's not what ya do; 
Hurting is the name of your Game!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 2:01 PM
Love the 6th stanza! Excellent piece. I greatly admire your resilience. Always, Laura
Promise Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Laura, sorry for being so slow to respond. Glad I was able to make you smile. God bless, RP.
Promise Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:02 PM
Thanks Laura, sorry for being so slow to respond. Glad I was able to make you smile. God bless, RP.
Van Breda Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Awesome.. loved your play on words and the way you flowed this write through. #7 ~~X~~
Promise Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Very nice of you to say so Kim. I thought it funny when my grandson said that he was "rapping", then I realized that its a story made up as you go along. This is a rap that's no body else's work. If you have a bad day at work, just rap what happened away! Best wishes, RP.
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