Not That Type of Lover

Not that Type of Lover, 2012
V. Ortiz Vazquez

I am not that type of lover
You know, the one who softly caresses you with her gentle touch
Take you places by whispering sweet words into your earlobe
Out of no-where brushes you with her warmth breathe
I am not that type of lover
You know

I am not that type of lover
The one who open your door like a “gentleman”
Put her coat on you to keep you warm
Or places her Blazer on a puddle
You know, the one who brings flowers just because
I am not that type of lover
You know

I am not that type of lover
You know, constantly sending you hearts via text
Writing love songs, poems, stories
With pen, pencil strokes capture her effortless thoughts of you
Gesture drawings render her live heart
I am not that type of lover
You know

I am not that type of lover
But, I would walk beside you every moment; endlessly
Synchronize my breath to yours
Listen closely and become enraged for you
Transfix my days on the next time we see each other again
Inject your wishes deep within my veins
You know

You know, the lover whose heart turn to rock upon your dislike
Melts by the winks of your eye
The one tattoo by your words of “I love you”
Where skin deep shows the true colors
Perplex by light shining through your soul
Rhythmic waves encourage bloodstream flow
You know
A lover with secrets, hidden past—not so much
Moments of threats dismantle by a simple thought of sweetness
Sweet emotions
Ecstasy
Daily intoxication, production of your morning kisses
Night kisses
Addicted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/14/2012 6:38:00 PM
such potential! try replacing the [that] with [the] lines 3 [takes] line 4 [with her warm breathe] or [the warmth of her breathe] & check breathe I always get it wrong there may not be an [e] on the end. second verse 5th line [gestures drawing renderings of her live heart] verse 5 line 1 [whose heart turns] line 3 [the one whose name is tatooed by]..they are VERY small chnages and will help alot! Light & Love
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