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Not So Lucky Lottery

I went to the store to buy a lottery ticket But wanted to get lucky before I would pick it I asked the girl at the counter If, perhaps, I could mount her And was told just where I should stick it

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 7:37:00 PM

Hi,Joe this is interesting;}Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA }i{

Ralph Taylor

Date: 1/16/2012 7:24:00 PM

Congrats, Joe. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/16/2012 2:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Joe! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 11:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Christopher Bunton

Date: 1/16/2012 6:39:00 AM

congratulations

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2012 5:23:00 AM

lol, joe... congrats on your grand win! :) huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2012 10:50:00 PM

Joe,, a wonderful win in Susan's contest ;-) congratulations, on a poem well done,..always yours one and only,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2012 4:06:00 PM

haha, I liked this better actually on the second read!! "get lucky" in line two didn't pop out at me the first time. Congrats on your win!

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/15/2012 3:29:00 PM

ohhh myyyy. Congrats on your win!!

David Williams

Date: 1/15/2012 2:01:00 PM

Joe congrats on your win, which would you rather have ha ha..David

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/15/2012 1:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Joe. Elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2012 12:26:00 PM

congrats Joe on a super first place win..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2012 10:59:00 PM

oh boy , be careful what you tell those store clerks. Funny guy!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/8/2012 4:01:00 AM

Well Joe, this is so good, you deserve to win with this, the contest and the lottery. harry

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/8/2012 3:43:00 AM

This is a good One Joe. Elizabeth

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2012 10:26:00 AM

Lucky or not......!?!? oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/7/2012 9:27:00 AM

With most of the girls I meet at the lottery machines these days, I would clasp my hands together with palms touching each other, and say "namaste". This is a cute limerick, and I wish you luck with it Joe.