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Not Nice

He left the flophouse but the reek of sweat stayed with him, his T-shirt already stained, so he lit a Gauloise as he mounted his truck covering one reek with another . He took a selfie while time passed and his ice melted. The street was a sea of red, white, and blue, he’d been in this country more than ten years but never been touched with a sense of belonging until the crowd’s chanting turned to screaming and in a hail of bullets he tasted bile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/1/2017 12:00:00 AM
Such a horror and for what... Your words are succinct in conveying the senselessness. Its scary that this is real and not creative fiction yet an excellent write Dave. lynnxxx
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 4/1/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Lynn, this is one of my reaction writes - my way of coping with news I can't really comprehend
Date: 7/23/2016 6:19:00 PM
Such a tragedy in Nice - I despair of what is happening in our world Dave:-( hugs Jan xx
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/25/2016 12:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan, it is hard to understated all this and that wa smy reaction.

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