Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Not Missing Loves Beat

Not Missing Love’s Beat

Not missing love’s beat . . . .
Sails to you this golden bright morning rising so high 
Sails waving with light, joy, and such promise and hope 
One smile gasping breathless always for you my love

As you walk with me deeply into Eden’s very paradise
Dancing my heart love on that yellow brick road of dreams
Dying to be with you my love forever and ever and ever 
Dreams inside of eternal youth with my heart pounding so	

Awaiting the very day to come when I stand before you 
Down on bended knee holding your hands warmly smiling 
Kissing each and every single fingertip so exquisitely 
I shall ask you to be forever and always with me my love 

You will be my Queen with dazzling jewels of an ocean wide 
The other heartbeat echoing as two becomes one complete
Our thirst for love and passion is almost unquenchable
And my very psyche is afire with excitement when we caress

Sleeping at night my love brings me into your dream world
Where it’s me and you and you and me together floating
Through the very ether of time breathing rarefied air so
Deliciously as we’re hopelessly mesmerized in true love 

When I awaken from our nocturnal dream trance so joyously
We hold one another so lovingly and caress so warmly at once
We kiss passionately and longingly in a most sublime spirit while
Not missing love’s beat . . . . 

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 24, 2014) 
(Free Verse)

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Meg Anderson December 28, 2014 at 1:06 PM Once again just beautiful! Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 5:06 PM thank you kindly meg wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Ahmed Abdi December 28, 2014 at 4:40 AM good and inspiring poem, keep the flame dear Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 5:05 PM ahmed wonderful comment thank you kindly the flames always burns bless you

Seren Roberts December 28, 2014 at 2:51 AM Such a wonderful poem to read, well done both.....Seren Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 5:03 PM seren thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2014 at 9:50 PM Passionate and romantic as always. you two make beautiful music together!! Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 5:02 PM thank you kindly andrea dear pal for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Sudha Chandra December 27, 2014 at 9:14 PM Very beautiful indeed!! Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 5:00 PM sudha thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Dorian Petersen Potter December 27, 2014 at 5:22 PM Congratulation Liam and Gary on this very beautiful piece of yours being chosen as poem of the day! So well deserved!I am so very happy for you two! Enjoy the day! I wish you all the best and a very Happy New Year! God bless you always!:) Love and hugs! xxx D. Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:56 PM thank you dorian dear friend for the beautiful comment wishing you a happy year

Tim Smith December 27, 2014 at 4:11 PM Congrats liam and Gary Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:17 PM thank you so kindly tim dear pal deeply appreciated

Eve Roper December 27, 2014 at 1:38 PM Congratulations Liam and Gary on poem of the day. Blessings and a Happy New Year Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:13 PM eve wishing you a beautiful year ahead thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you

Nette Onclaud December 27, 2014 at 1:14 PM cheers to you and gary for the POTD citation!.. huggs Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:11 PM thank you nette dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Anne-Lise Andresen December 27, 2014 at 12:16 PM - So beautiful Liam & Gary ............ Congrats with p.o.t.d.!!!!! - huggs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:07 PM thank you kindly dear pal sorry i am late answering bless you for the wonderful comment

Maurice Yvonne December 27, 2014 at 11:23 AM Congratulations Liam and Gary on your work being chosen as poem of the day. Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:05 PM maurice thank you dear friend sorry i am late way behind with everything deeply appreciated pal

Maurice Yvonne December 27, 2014 at 11:21 AM WOW! This is an amazing collab. A Fav!

David Meade December 27, 2014 at 10:13 AM The boys do it again!! Way to go -- I said it before and I will say it again -- you guys rock!! Congrats on POTD Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:02 PM thank you david for the dancing in the mind beautiful comment breaks a smile

Brenda Meier-Hans December 27, 2014 at 9:11 AM Congratulations Liam and Gary on POTD. Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 4:00 PM thank you brenda dear friend deeply appreciated

Joseph May December 27, 2014 at 8:06 AM Congrats to both of you on Poem of the Day...well done Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 3:59 PM thank you kindly joseph for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Eileen Manassian December 27, 2014 at 7:12 AM Congrats on POTD! You and Gary collab so well together, Liam. It's great to have such a friendship. :) Sending you both greetings. May your wishes come true in the new year. Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 3:57 PM my new year lol started with a bang gary got me smiling saying the leprechaun was blinded by a rainbow searching for gold ha ha i will wait for next years wishes pal as i am away behind this year thank you for the wonderful comment wishing you a great year

Gary Bateman December 25, 2014 at 5:56 PM Liam Mate!! This one looks remote familiar -- oh yeah, it's our co-write!! Great Job working this one together. It did turn out quite well!! (Check Out "Enchanted Vision of Love So Pure" -- I did get it posted tonight based on our earlier conversation. I sent you the final word version too.) Hope Christmas was great today for you. Best Holiday Wishes Mate!! Gary Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 3:50 PM sorry for the late reply gary between storms networks thank you pal a warm pleasure smiles with the leprechaun

Jan Allison December 25, 2014 at 4:37 PM such a wonderful romantic write from two very talented poets - love the imagery - i don't want to miss the love boat:-) Hugs jan xxx Liam Mcdaid January 5, 2015 at 3:47 PM thank you jan truly beautiful comment dear friend bless you sorry for the late reply

Nette Onclaud December 25, 2014 at 2:43 PM fascinating creation from you and david, liam... sweet affection runs though this page... merry holidays to you... huggs Liam Mcdaid December 27, 2014 at 3:46 PM nette i pray you had a beautiful christmas wishing you a happy new year thank you kindly for the wonderful comment de\ar friend

Dorian Petersen Potter December 25, 2014 at 12:17 PM Hello Liam and Gary ! Very awesome romantic beautiful piece you both have penned here my very dear friends. I'm really in awe on how you two really put something together like this beautiful dazzling love poem here. You two never stop amazing me with your wonderful writing talents and how you make it work. You are great poets ! Your pens are golden! Very beautiful piece! I love it! A solid 7 +++ to each of you! Merry Christmas to you both! Have a great evening :) Love and hugs! xoxox D. Liam Mcdaid December 27, 2014 at 2:11 PM thank you kindly dorian dear pal wishing you a happy new year with festive blessings wonderful comment bless you