Not Meant To Last

I opened my eyes at birth and cried out in shock and pain. For I found myself on Earth and it seemed strange and arcane. I didn't want to be here in this world of hate and scorn. And with clenched fists and a tear I protested being born. I left the warmth of the womb for a future with no past. And my birth will end in doom for life is not meant to last. God intends souls to suffer, or at least it seems that way. For life keeps getting tougher, and it doesn't help to pray. I search for a glint of hope in a world devoid of light. And though I've learned to cope, misery's not far from sight. One day I will be no more life will simply slip away. And death will slam shut the door that opened on my birthday. (Quatrain) 2/13/2015

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Date: 3/16/2018 4:03:00 PM
An awesome unique perspective. So well written. A FAVE with me.
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:26:00 PM
I think some people really feel this way , which makes it all the sadder. it's a very expressive poem. Much liked!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2015 12:25:00 PM
You continue to bring a smile to my day as I bask in the after glow of your praise. Thank you. Emile.
Date: 2/13/2015 6:54:00 PM
This is becoming a daily habit, reading one from you, sire. As always, you don't disappoint...Life after all, in the eternal scheme of things, is just but a hairbreadth...A 7. had the guts to come out with, with a few tweaks...my cheeks are warm...Happy Valentine smiles from the land of thousand isles...Kim:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/14/2015 12:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/13/2015 3:43:00 PM
Very powerful pen Emile! I enjoyed reading your piece so very much, my dear friend! Well written! A 7 from me! Have a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! And I wish a very happy Valentines Day! :) Love n hugs! xxx D.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/13/2015 6:19:00 PM
Thanks Dorian, I glad you liked it, and have a happy Valentines Day. Emile.
Date: 2/13/2015 11:15:00 AM
Very emotive and expressive but there is hope..No matter what there is always hope..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/13/2015 6:17:00 PM
Yes hope is eternal, thanks Sara. Emile.
Date: 2/13/2015 9:13:00 AM
Well said:)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/13/2015 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Njeri, I appreciate it. Emile.
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