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out of reach out of touch crossing paths Submitted on October 22, 2017 for contest LATE OCTOBER PREMIERE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/23/2017 4:28:00 PM

How sad so few words describes a world of loneliness

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:38:00 PM

Thanks for reaching out. Love your visits.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/22/2017 10:27:00 PM

Line, I love your title... it's the fourth line in your Senryu and it's ingenious. So much loss expressed in a few lines. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:38:00 PM

Hi Susan, thank you so much for dropping me a line. Best regards.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/22/2017 9:41:00 AM

Well proximated 6 words.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:39:00 PM

Thanks Richard for leaving me a comment.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 10/22/2017 8:18:00 AM

Line Volumes in a few word on three lines! My best to you, chuck

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:39:00 PM

Thanks Chuck. I appreciate your visit and note.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/22/2017 8:13:00 AM

A loaded little penning, my best to you for the contest :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2017 7:40:00 PM

Thank you Maureen. I appreciate your visit and your note. Line xx