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Not Letting Go

Cold hand numbing holds this lump of anguish and hate trying to flee beneath the skin restless and persistent, inside thy vein its throbbing... then freed, but bleeds from the core when ache is fading; hand seeks while its fingers' open, nobody to hold, now clasped its own as palm with thorns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/27/2008 6:17:00 PM
An excellent write expressing gloom -beautiful imagery. Very impressive. Thanks for for yourcomments on my poem The Paint Brush - Mohammad
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