Not Junk To Me

Buried in a great big trunk
are things that some might call junk
Sweet cards from old friends and beaus,
decades-old knick-knacks and prose.

“Unclutter your life,” some say.
“Throw what you don’t use away.”
I say to them, “Let me be.
My keepsakes aren’t junk to me.”

*This is jeuju poetry. Here is Soup's basic definition of the form:
A Jueju is a type of poem from China that consists of a matched pair of couplets. Each line has either five syllables or seven syllables, so I followed the model given at Soup and then I wrote two Jeuju that go together.

March 22, 2022
For the Form J - Just Write Me A New Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
(#4 word chosen: junk)
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La France Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:57 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Lovely Write. Keepsakes and memories are not junk, they are the best thing to keep close to one's heart. Have a blessed day...............
Alex Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 10:03 PM
"My keepsakes aren’t junk to me" - True. They are precious, sometimes. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Interesting form, Andrea. Unusual, but then it is a contest! Good luck! Bill
Brewer Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 2:24 PM
And you did it well in this effective demo of the jeuju form. Well done! Andrea.
Canerdy Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 7:09 PM
That's right. Each person has a right to define "junk"! Good poem, Andrea! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
March 23, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Within such confines, you did a great job of expressing yourself! Aloha!
Roper Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 8:09 PM
you sound like me; it is hard to throw anything memorable away.
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 7:33 PM
Well done, Andrea. In different definitions, there seems to be some question about the rhyme scheme, but I followed (as you did) Poetry Soup's directions. Jueju consists of a matched pair of couplets!
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 6:30 PM
oh I can relate, these keepsakes hold such precious memories, love the theme you chose:-) hugs Jan xx
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