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Not For the Squeamish

Ominous shots sound far in the distance Echoes lunge toward us grow ever near Grim foes tear down the gates with persistence In blows hurl wild flurries of ice cold fear Relentless on our guard it's them or us Gloomy skies foreshadow bloody skirmish Nothing short of heated hellish chaos This here turbulence ain't for the squeamish Against front line action we raise our shields Soldiers will soon succumb to the nightmare Wish I could remember bucolic fields Where the sun glittered in Mae's golden hair I'd trade my last prayer for a sole rose As clouds hover o'er the poppy meadows AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on December 12, 2019 for A BRIAN STRAND SONNET contest sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST for contest YOUR BEST SONNET JULY-DECEMBER 2019 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON and on January 7, 2019 for contest WAR SONNET sponsored by MARK MASSEY

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Date: 7/31/2021 6:06:00 AM
You’ve made us feel that chill moment of war, the one where the sweetheart is thought of, the poppy fields prepared to receive its dead. Congratulations,Line!
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Date: 7/31/2021 3:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim ~
Date: 7/30/2021 8:39:00 PM
This is a poignant piece reminiscent of the soldier's feelings before a decisive battle. Good writing, Line.
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Date: 7/31/2021 3:10:00 PM
Most appreciated, Milton ~
Date: 1/8/2019 6:09:00 AM
This is rather cleverly done and war is such a horrid subject but, you've made "lemonade" with this one; good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/8/2019 2:22:00 AM
Beautiful, and throwing in poppy fields was a coup de grace! I think that is right, maybe wrong, but good luck in the contest, Line.
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 1/8/2019 12:24:00 AM
Well well written! good luck in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/8/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Timothy.

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