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Not Feeling It

I got bad feet, diabetically speaking The proper medical terminology, or so the doctors tell me, it’s chronic neuropathy These feet don’t have feelings like the rest of my body I’m just a live man walking on dead feet You can step on my toes and I won’t feel it Now if you step on my heart, well, that’s a matter altogether different Not feeling it ain’t all bad — early retirement is a fruit smoothie table side and a lounge chair ... kicking my feet up in the air Feet if you fail me now, I really don’t care Can you dig where this brother’s coming from ... can you feel the pain I do occasionally get in my feet? Crippling pain which makes you a potted plant that can’t even run It feels like you’re walking on hot needles shot from a blow dryer gun You say you’re not feeling it, well good for you Just remember, one day them might not be your most comfortable shoes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/15/2018 8:07:00 PM
My friend, I am so sorry for your pain even when you make light of it in this remarkable piece penned by a remarkable human being! You are the greatest and I applaud you! Love and hugs! Pandita
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Date: 2/6/2018 10:30:00 AM
Hi Freddie, Your pen is amazing. Your are able to take real and serious issues and produce a piece such as this :-) Alexis
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Date: 2/5/2018 3:24:00 PM
Love those first two lines, another great poem that only your pen can produce with your array of vocabulary...
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Date: 2/5/2018 12:20:00 PM
Freddie, your poetry is boss..." Feet if you fail me now, I really don’t care Can you dig where this brother’s coming from ..." All the best my friend
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Date: 2/5/2018 11:22:00 AM
You took this poem to towering heights with simple words of awesome impact. Many can relate to the feelings you describe. You did this with humor, amid pain..well said, Freddie.
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