Not Exactly Break Dancing

On a hot summer night
To a nightclub we danced
My girlfriends and i
Music entranced
 
There i was 
Giving it all
When something happened
That made me fall
 
In disbelief 
Dancing to MJ's beat
My kneecap snapped
Broken real neat
 
The doctors said
It was the strangest break
The pain you have
Will keep you awake
 
No more standing
For weeks to come
I'll let you know
Don't be so glum
 
In the heat of summer
Long days stuck in
Watching TV
Looked after by kin
 
I long for the day
To get back to school
To be with my friends
Who are all real cool
 
The miss of my friends
Sends me round the bend
No job, no money
Parental spend
 
This lucky young lady
Has a caring mum
If it wasn't for her
I sure would be glum
 
So Julia, i said to myself
Your not exactly, left on the shelf
I will get better, wait and see
Back to dancing, 123
 
In time I'll look back
And visualise
The angel who helped
And realise
 
That was my mom
I love her so much
As only mums do
That loving moms touch

 
 
This poem was written for a dear friends daughter, get well soon Julia.



http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life3.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/3/2009 10:11:00 AM
Thankyou James.
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Date: 8/22/2009 6:31:00 PM
A nice poem/story of reminiscence. I enjoyed the read and special tribute to your mom. God bless her. You were blessed with a special mom. Thank you for sharing and thank you for reviewing and commenting on some of my poems. I will return the favor as time allows. Caroline.
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:53:00 AM
Get well soon Julia.....and well penned Fraser--charma
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:22:00 AM
Lovely dedication James. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2009 4:42:00 PM
Nicely written. Hope the friend's daughter gets well soon. Keep writing. Sara
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