James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Not An Inch Uncovered

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            As the leaves from the trees
                        in Autumn
                   all over the ground
                not an inch uncovered

                   so my love for you
                     with my fingers
                          my lips
                        my words

              not an inch of your body
                        uncovered

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:22 PM WOW, James and I mean that in the most romantic way posible... LINDA James Peranteau August 4, 2023 at 11:09 PM ;) <- and i mean that in the most romantic way girl...much love, me

Richard Lamoureux April 18, 2015 at 9:17 AM This is so romantic!

Laura Breidenthal April 18, 2015 at 3:46 AM This is a delightful free-verse. I love the affection of this small but powerful piece. The nature of the leaves of Autumn invoke a gentility to the piece, and the lines that follow bring life and texture to the one receiving such love. I've always enjoyed your poetry... can't wait to read some more! Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock April 17, 2015 at 4:10 PM Love the sensuality of this poem James. A very creative piece my friend. love phyl

Constance La France April 17, 2015 at 8:03 AM James, aaah so beautifully worded, very nice, 7 and thanks for visiting my very loooong poem, the story of my life

Kp Nunez April 17, 2015 at 6:41 AM Wow...such sensuality...guess your short hiatus has brought on a new surge of sensual creative energy, eh? A 7. Best regards, James! :) Kim

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2015 at 9:41 PM very sexy, very nice!!!

Jan Allison April 16, 2015 at 7:56 PM beautifully sensual James :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Nette Onclaud April 16, 2015 at 5:23 PM wow, very interesting and well done, james.. enjoyed this,, huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter April 16, 2015 at 5:14 PM Very nice pen James! You've painted this piece amazingly well,dear friend. Great imagery! Well done!A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light! God bless you! :) D.

Tim Smith April 16, 2015 at 4:56 PM Great comparison James...lovely Tim

Sulakshana Bhattacharya April 16, 2015 at 2:08 PM So passionate, yet so soft and warm. Great job James!:)

Charmaine Chircop April 16, 2015 at 1:56 PM Lovely imagery to the mind with such verses written..Charma.