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Not An Inch Uncovered

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            As the leaves from the trees
                        in Autumn
                   all over the ground
                not an inch uncovered

                   so my love for you
                     with my fingers
                          my lips
                        my words

              not an inch of your body
                        uncovered

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 6:22:00 PM

WOW, James and I mean that in the most romantic way posible... LINDA

James Peranteau
Date: 8/4/2023 11:09:00 PM

;) <- and i mean that in the most romantic way girl...much love, me

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2015 9:17:00 AM

This is so romantic!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/18/2015 3:46:00 AM

This is a delightful free-verse. I love the affection of this small but powerful piece. The nature of the leaves of Autumn invoke a gentility to the piece, and the lines that follow bring life and texture to the one receiving such love. I've always enjoyed your poetry... can't wait to read some more! Always, Laura

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/17/2015 4:10:00 PM

Love the sensuality of this poem James. A very creative piece my friend. love phyl

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2015 8:03:00 AM

James, aaah so beautifully worded, very nice, 7 and thanks for visiting my very loooong poem, the story of my life

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/17/2015 6:41:00 AM

Wow...such sensuality...guess your short hiatus has brought on a new surge of sensual creative energy, eh? A 7. Best regards, James! :) Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2015 9:41:00 PM

very sexy, very nice!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2015 7:56:00 PM

beautifully sensual James :-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/16/2015 5:23:00 PM

wow, very interesting and well done, james.. enjoyed this,, huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/16/2015 5:14:00 PM

Very nice pen James! You've painted this piece amazingly well,dear friend. Great imagery! Well done!A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light! God bless you! :) D.