Not a Test - of Love

I
I began writing poetry, seriously, at college
About worldly affairs, my scant knowledge
Prevented the privilege of love. I acknowledge
Ladies like Lilly, Saras, and Nerissa: Ed College
(No man, mind you; short for Education College)
A Fulbright scholarship led to miscarriage
Of my love-affairs. Didn't commit sacrilege
Pondered punctuation in life. My US college
Reduced my many commas, and exclamation
And somehow this helped my poetrification

II
A serious Love Poem, scuttled with notebook
By my younger brother, on Ashrina Ram Zook
I turned, sadly, in pages titled ASHES OF LOVE
I recall infatuation - classic - as in a textbook
But I never talked with Ash, I, a teen Mook
Thus I can't preach puppy love I forsook
Cos I never got beyond a furtive look
Stopped spelling 'priviledge' so, like 'knowledge'
For now I study at another COLLEDGE!
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George Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 10:22 PM
This is so full of candid confessions, dear Anil spluttered with mustard seeds of humor ! Your 'Ashes of Love' blown by the wind has brought a smile to my lips ! I enjoyed this poem so much Anil !
Deo Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 11:17 PM
It was worth humiliating the pastor-evangelist in me, then. U r a wonderful audience - participant. I have 2 brothers, 2 sisters ... Or was it dad who thrashed my one notebook of poetry? My mom treated any writing as sacred ( she blessed me with Indian culture)
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2022 at 3:04 PM
This is an intriguing piece of writing. Before calling you to the ministry, it appears that God has chosen a route for you that includes education, expertise, and life experience. God has a plan for each and every one of us. We all end up exactly where God intends for us to be. Enjoyed... Prayers and Blessings always Debra
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January 18, 2022 at 7:44 AM
You have had your fair share of studies, Anil...and a Fulbright scholarship is something to be proud of! Love needs no college, but a sincere heart which is ready to put up with joy and pain. ~ Best regards, my friend. Hope the new year is treating you well. // paul
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January 18, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Shalom shalom Paul. Thanks - and I say this in love & friendship - you have again graced my work by commenting. Blessings all if 2022
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