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Not a Safe Time

Winter winds start blowing snow on the road and icy patches make the asphalt slick, sending cars careening into the ditch. Their tires spinning, cars end up in the ditch though city trucks apply salt to the road; for there's no grip; the pavement's still slick. Black ice and slushy snow pave the streets slick, stranding vehicles all along the ditch; it's not a safe time to be on the road. The road is slick; you'll skid into a ditch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/25/2019 4:46:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2019 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:51:00 PM
made me so glad we haven't suffered from too much snow this year, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2019 4:23:00 PM
Awesome, Emile. So many great writes in this contest and yours was among them. Love how you did this. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Date: 2/25/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Charles, your comments and support are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2019 2:39:00 PM
I really like how you did this one about something current. The winter is SO bad this year. Congrats on your win, Emile.
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Date: 2/24/2019 3:24:00 PM
Thanks for your support Andrea, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/15/2019 6:20:00 PM
We're having the same weather up here, Emile. Hibernation is wonderful these days.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/16/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thanks for your support Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/15/2019 4:16:00 PM
Your words describe the scene in the photo perfectly, Emile. It must be frightening just to drive a few blocks, never mind freeways where you can slide into the ditches. I remember how it felt driving on black ice once and feel lucky to have survived. Great writing! Winning wishes for you in Charlie's contest. You made good use of the form too.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/15/2019 5:29:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, I value your comments my friend, Emile.

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