Get Your Premium Membership

Not a Hope In Sight

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Line Gauthier.


in the heat of the moment
all seemed lost
while we drifted apart



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/15/2023 12:18:00 PM
I really like the emotions conflicted + counter weighted in your short piece. Your first line suggests passion (or anger) then a loss till the closing separation. I enjoyed the shift in each line. Excellent! Be well. Brian
Login to Reply
Gauthier Avatar
Line Gauthier
Date: 7/16/2023 10:08:00 PM
Most appreciated, Brian ~

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry