Debjani Mitra Poet Pantoum

Nostalgia

A cascade of autumn leaves lying scattered all around
in faded pale light, nostalgia is tucked in some bygones
forest air still redolent of pink azaleas profound, 
reclaiming back those moments in images and icons.

In faded pale light, nostalgia is tucked in some bygones.
riding that chariot of rainstorm, did we not then dance? 
reclaiming back those moments in images and icons,
promissory of dreams, beckoning rainbow of romance.

Riding that chariot of rainstorm, did we not then dance? 
remember under that tree, I dissolved in your wrapped arms
promissory of dreams, beckoning rainbow of romance,
molten moments of candle wax, awakened in your charms 

Remember under that tree, I dissolved in your wrapped arms,
forest air still redolent of pink azaleas profound. 
Molten moments of candle wax, awakened in your charms.
A cascade of autumn leaves lying scattered all around.



Dated 18th June 2020

14 syllable in each line : howmanysyllable
Picture Prompt #2

Sponsor	Eve Roper
Contest Name	feelings of nostalgia

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Jan Allison July 27, 2020 at 5:16 PM I'm just listening to the Justin heyward track forever autumn, and it the perfect piece with your lovely lines, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 12:59 AM Your tender muse melts my heart like those moments of candle wax. This is a fave for me! Such a soothing muse. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Eve Roper July 19, 2020 at 12:05 PM Debjani, you expressed the deep feelings of emotion by placing the reader in the scene. I love the lines, "remember under that tree, I dissolved in your wrapped arms molten moments of candle wax, awakened in your charms" Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Michelle Faulkner June 18, 2020 at 5:02 PM Such gorgeous lines, especially 'chariot of rainstorm' and 'molten moments of candle wax' - should be a top winner!