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Nose Dive

He tried his best to destroy it, Shambhala, the city in the sky. No dark one can touch what the light controls; so when he dropped the bomb, it ricocheted backwards; sent him into a nose dive to hardened ground. Darkness will never conquer the light; light blinds the eyes that reject it’s grace; the dark collects it’s debris to save face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/13/2019 4:23:00 PM
The last stanza just amazing, so provocative and stirring, M.L!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/14/2019 9:06:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 8/10/2019 11:21:00 AM
Light will always conquer dark - good versus evil, the eternal belief! Well penned my friend, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/14/2019 9:07:00 PM
Always has, always will.
Date: 8/8/2019 3:11:00 PM
I like the 'morality play' aspect of this write. Darkness should not ever be able to conquer light. That's just how things should be! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 8/14/2019 9:07:00 PM
But it keeps trying. Thanks Gershon.

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