Northern Stillness

This Poem is for the referential poetry contest and was inspired by Cotton Pickin' Paradise by Tim Ryerson



Well north of the bustling city
before the crackle of nights winter fires
hard hats, black backs and frozen fingers
shiver starkly in time with their iron picks
sharp strikes upon the icy earth,
shattering the frozen northern stillness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 9, 2016 at 2:13 AM
GOOD ONE
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July 18, 2013 at 10:15 PM
Mitchell, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT
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July 18, 2013 at 2:48 PM
Congrad's on your fine work winning! Light & Love
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July 18, 2013 at 3:50 AM
Good morning Mitchell...Congratulations on your win!...I like the stark contrast between your verse and mine (cold, hot, north, south) Great job and I am honored that you used my poem for inspiration...Looking forward to reading more of your work - Tim
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