Noose

Could I not follow?
And if I could not,
Would that be shallow?

One phrase, a simple breeze
‘Twas all I wanted,
Between the trees.

Yet every open hand
Is measured for a blade;
Every silence made to stand—
Proof of something I made.

I grow tired of explaining
What love is not to me,
As though affection, unrestraining,
Must conceal duplicity.

Every word, a trial,
Each kindness, accused.
Every act, a file.
And somehow, everything, excused.

All the evening asked of me
Was only stillness, only air.
I had it once, between the trees.
I cannot find, no more.

Could I not follow?
And if I could not,
Could I swallow?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Agustin Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Chun Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 2:50 PM
May the Lord bless you for faithfully heralding his good news to those who need them. And don’t we all.
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