Noises and Voices-2

NOISES AND VOICES
                       ( By  S.Jagathsimhan  Nair) 

In my hotel room
I  am abridged to a cube of light
I fold up into  silence
The room is now full of noises
I took nine months to notice its
Paint’s tint. Its off pink brazenness
Its saffron aloofness, its overall
Oneness with my mind’s divisions.
 Masons’  toil and owner’s order
And the combined craft  receives
Caparisoned flesh and fleshed souls
Flesh that knows not openness
Souls that know not oneness with space
Despite its fast format of flux
It’s but its very same sameness
Wound up histories live side by but
How are the living mere actors
This  strange physician with a stare
Prescribes a drug- god dichotomy
For cure. Another   inmate kills his
Cancer with liquor and cigar
A plain youth plays cards with his peers
Occasionally a bedlam
Keeps mum or an argument mediates
Meditate incurably or
Float dead-flat in a rock-hard cot
Caught in its vortex I am flying
To its fringe. Is this bruise
Showing out of the earth. Is it
A piece of news blessing the battered
Here now I’m once again abridged
To a cube of nonchalant light
I wake up from my  silence
The room is full of rare voices.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/29/2012 11:08:00 PM
Such a complex piece of poetry, Jag..I am so glad I chose this one this morning...It seems almost as tho the person is schizophrenic with the voices and distortion of reality...wow, gripping...please tell me some background if you have the time..I am fascinated by its lingo...Hugs, Gwendolen
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Date: 10/6/2011 6:46:00 PM
very eerie... reminds me of my hospitilization days... creepy ass roomates
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Date: 10/6/2011 8:44:00 AM
Puts me in a spin Jag, interesting take on low life activity which is fascinating in its squalaor. Well done my friend. PS your visits are always special.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:14:00 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2011 1:19:00 PM
explosive imagery, jag.. nightmarish, eerie but wonderfully rendered! :) huggs, nette
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