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Noise To Entice -The Noise Contest

We stood at the side of the pond Listening to a noise so loud was absurd, Looked into the murky waters beyond, No sight, just this very loud sound we heard. Talking to the locals who laughed out loud Made it more of a mystery beyond measure So every night we would gather like a small crowd Trying to fathom what fish or insect intruded our leisure Then one local whispered in my ear Was a tiny insect smaller than a grain of rice The guilty one whose noise we heard A water boatman, rubbing his genitals on his stomach to entice. Penned 6/03/2017 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VpWSHgySqI4: you can hear how loud a noise they make.

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Date: 3/22/2017 10:23:00 AM
Big Congrats Seren to win top place. Hugs
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:06:00 PM
Thank you Anisha....Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 5:19:00 PM
LOL ok I am laughing!!!! Congrats!!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2017 7:12:00 PM
lol guesed you would..Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 1:51:00 PM
Giggle! ;) Awesome write, congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 3/19/2017 7:12:00 PM
can u imagine ......no no dont ....seren
Date: 3/19/2017 12:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2017 7:13:00 PM
thank you Joseph...Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 11:54:00 AM
Congrats Seren on the trophy win !!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/19/2017 7:13:00 PM
hi Tim thank you...Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations Seren wonderful poem, well deserved win, Roy. :)
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Date: 3/19/2017 7:16:00 PM
thank you...Roy....Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Seren, well done...
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Date: 3/19/2017 7:17:00 PM
Hello Charles...many thanks....Seren
Date: 3/19/2017 2:46:00 AM
superb Seren love it congrats on first hugs
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Date: 3/8/2017 9:24:00 PM
Remarkable how a tiny insect can make so much sound. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/7/2017 3:24:00 AM
Excellent. A big noise. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/6/2017 3:37:00 PM
Im putting my fingers in my ears...lol
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Date: 3/6/2017 2:29:00 PM
Fabulous poem Seren and having heard the sound gosh what a noise they make ha ha ha sounds like a forhorn lol - sure made me lol:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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