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nocturnal nectar hiku

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                         s w i r l s ~ 
      nocturnal nectar

moonhaiku

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Howard Kerr

Date: 5/28/2025 12:23:00 AM

Hi Ink Empress, Your composition oozes rich imaginative pickings from your eternally endowed pen. An embarrassment of riches that are anything but blush inducing. Enchanting narrative and supple haiku design Howard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2025 8:28:00 PM

Utterly gorgeous as well as creative. Congrats, Ink.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 5/7/2025 3:14:00 AM

Sounds magical!! So beautiful. Have a wonderful day!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/3/2025 10:26:00 AM

IE, a very nice way to think of some goings on at night. I consider myself very lucky to be able to let myself think about it the way you describe it. The connections are very mind expanding. Smiles!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:58:00 AM

Thank you so much dear duke im grateful for your generous support always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2025 11:43:00 PM

Magical and lovely. Congrats, Nette

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/26/2025 8:28:00 PM

Oopsies! Just now noticing this

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:58:00 AM

Thank you so much sweet andrea , haha youv put the wrong name .

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/2/2025 1:00:00 PM

This goes down like a smooth cordial. Just beautiful! Congrats, IE!

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear kim, always appreciate your kind and generous support! Sending you light

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/2/2025 4:12:00 AM

Charming imagery! Masterfully done. Good luck in contest. May have a winner here. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:46:00 AM

Thank you dear joe always! Grateful for your kind support truly! Sending you light

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/1/2025 10:14:00 PM

Hello Ink, this is a beautifully creative and artistic piece. A fav for me. Good luck with the contest. Wishing you a great day and a fantastic weekend, my friend. Stay Blessed.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:45:00 AM

Thank you so very kind and generous also of you to leave a fave! Appreciate always your sincere support truly

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 5:32:00 PM

brilliant and creative, thanks poet

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:43:00 AM

Thank you dear Yann, appreciate your support

Paige Hind

Date: 5/1/2025 5:29:00 PM

Really a breathtaking image - "spills rose sparks"

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thank you dear paige so kind of you always

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/1/2025 4:53:00 PM

The little steps in clusters was a nice touch, swirly sweetness! <3

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:41:00 AM

Thank you so much, for your kind comment, grateful

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/1/2025 4:09:00 PM

A yoke of love holds form, facts of fate flirt with virgin freedom, embryo of a rose rises to the future of your hopes...J.A.B.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/1/2025 3:41:00 PM

Very nice hiku! It seems hiku is a haiku in shape format, moon curve in your hiku. Have a nice day ~ AA

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM

Thank you so much dear abdulla, hikus are fun! Grateful for your support

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2025 1:15:00 PM

Very creative IE and a stunning image. Tom

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM

Thank you so much dear tom always for your support

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 12:04:00 PM

You've created a beautiful picture in this haiku.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM

Thank you dear hilda! Grateful always

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/1/2025 12:01:00 PM

Beautiful haiku poem, dearest Ink. You probed the nature's ethereal beauty and converting force, focusing on lunar imaging and its fascinating influence on the natural world. The contrast of features such as "moon-flame," "rose sparkles," and "nocturnal nectar" implies a strong link between heavenly bodies and terrestrial events, outlining themes of love, beauty, and transcendence. My best wishes for the contest, offering you warm regards.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so very much dr sotto for your unwavering support

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 11:52:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your very creative "hiku" write. Great first line. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..........

Ink Empress
Date: 5/4/2025 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much dear paula

Lin Lane

Date: 5/1/2025 11:32:00 AM

Ink, is Hiku a legitimate form or a Strand dohickey? If it's legit... what the heck is the def?

Ink Empress
Date: 5/1/2025 11:51:00 AM

Hah awwn brian is a very innovative poet, and i really enjoy writing these. I keep accidentally typing to lioness hikey so she now calls it hiki. Lol thank you so much for your visit.