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nocturnal nectar hiku

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                         s w i r l s ~ 
      nocturnal nectar

Copyright © Ink Empress | Year Posted 2025

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May 28, 2025 at 12:23 AM

Hi Ink Empress, Your composition oozes rich imaginative pickings from your eternally endowed pen. An embarrassment of riches that are anything but blush inducing. Enchanting narrative and supple haiku design Howard

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2025 at 8:28 PM

Utterly gorgeous as well as creative. Congrats, Ink.

May 7, 2025 at 3:14 AM

Sounds magical!! So beautiful. Have a wonderful day!!

May 3, 2025 at 10:26 AM

IE, a very nice way to think of some goings on at night. I consider myself very lucky to be able to let myself think about it the way you describe it. The connections are very mind expanding. Smiles!!!

May 4, 2025 at 10:58 AM

Thank you so much dear duke im grateful for your generous support always

Andrea Dietrich

May 2, 2025 at 11:43 PM

Magical and lovely. Congrats, Nette

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2025 at 8:28 PM

Oopsies! Just now noticing this

May 4, 2025 at 10:58 AM

Thank you so much sweet andrea , haha youv put the wrong name .

May 2, 2025 at 1:00 PM

This goes down like a smooth cordial. Just beautiful! Congrats, IE!

May 4, 2025 at 10:48 AM

Thank you so very much dear kim, always appreciate your kind and generous support! Sending you light

Joseph P. DiMino

May 2, 2025 at 4:12 AM

Charming imagery! Masterfully done. Good luck in contest. May have a winner here. Blessings.

May 4, 2025 at 10:46 AM

Thank you dear joe always! Grateful for your kind support truly! Sending you light

May 1, 2025 at 10:14 PM

Hello Ink, this is a beautifully creative and artistic piece. A fav for me. Good luck with the contest. Wishing you a great day and a fantastic weekend, my friend. Stay Blessed.

May 4, 2025 at 10:45 AM

Thank you so very kind and generous also of you to leave a fave! Appreciate always your sincere support truly

May 1, 2025 at 5:32 PM

brilliant and creative, thanks poet

May 4, 2025 at 10:43 AM

Thank you dear Yann, appreciate your support

May 1, 2025 at 5:29 PM

Really a breathtaking image - "spills rose sparks"

May 4, 2025 at 10:41 AM

Thank you dear paige so kind of you always

May 1, 2025 at 4:53 PM

The little steps in clusters was a nice touch, swirly sweetness! <3

May 4, 2025 at 10:41 AM

Thank you so much, for your kind comment, grateful

May 1, 2025 at 4:09 PM

A yoke of love holds form, facts of fate flirt with virgin freedom, embryo of a rose rises to the future of your hopes...J.A.B.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

May 1, 2025 at 3:41 PM

Very nice hiku! It seems hiku is a haiku in shape format, moon curve in your hiku. Have a nice day ~ AA

May 4, 2025 at 10:39 AM

Thank you so much dear abdulla, hikus are fun! Grateful for your support

May 1, 2025 at 1:15 PM

Very creative IE and a stunning image. Tom

May 4, 2025 at 10:39 AM

Thank you so much dear tom always for your support

Hilda Greenhough

May 1, 2025 at 12:04 PM

You've created a beautiful picture in this haiku.

May 4, 2025 at 10:39 AM

Thank you dear hilda! Grateful always

May 1, 2025 at 12:01 PM

Beautiful haiku poem, dearest Ink. You probed the nature's ethereal beauty and converting force, focusing on lunar imaging and its fascinating influence on the natural world. The contrast of features such as "moon-flame," "rose sparkles," and "nocturnal nectar" implies a strong link between heavenly bodies and terrestrial events, outlining themes of love, beauty, and transcendence. My best wishes for the contest, offering you warm regards.

May 4, 2025 at 10:38 AM

Thank you so very much dr sotto for your unwavering support

Paula Goldsmith

May 1, 2025 at 11:52 AM

I enjoyed reading your very creative "hiku" write. Great first line. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..........

May 4, 2025 at 10:38 AM

Thank you so much dear paula

May 1, 2025 at 11:32 AM

Ink, is Hiku a legitimate form or a Strand dohickey? If it's legit... what the heck is the def?

May 1, 2025 at 11:51 AM

Hah awwn brian is a very innovative poet, and i really enjoy writing these. I keep accidentally typing to lioness hikey so she now calls it hiki. Lol thank you so much for your visit.

Lioness Onpaper

May 1, 2025 at 11:17 AM

Moon flame spills … oooo that is gorgeous!!! Oooo caviar swirls !!! This hiki is absolutely stunning!!!

May 1, 2025 at 11:21 AM

Are u goin to stick to hiki papi lol thank u

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