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nocturnal nectar hiku

moon-flame s p i l l s rose s p a r k s c l u s t e r e d in caviar s w i r l s ~ nocturnal nectar

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Date: 5/3/2025 10:26:00 AM
IE, a very nice way to think of some goings on at night. I consider myself very lucky to be able to let myself think about it the way you describe it. The connections are very mind expanding. Smiles!!!
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Date: 5/2/2025 11:43:00 PM
Magical and lovely. Congrats, Nette
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Date: 5/2/2025 1:00:00 PM
This goes down like a smooth cordial. Just beautiful! Congrats, IE!
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear kim, always appreciate your kind and generous support! Sending you light
Date: 5/2/2025 4:12:00 AM
Charming imagery! Masterfully done. Good luck in contest. May have a winner here. Blessings.
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:46:00 AM
Thank you dear joe always! Grateful for your kind support truly! Sending you light
Date: 5/1/2025 10:14:00 PM
Hello Ink, this is a beautifully creative and artistic piece. A fav for me. Good luck with the contest. Wishing you a great day and a fantastic weekend, my friend. Stay Blessed.
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:45:00 AM
Thank you so very kind and generous also of you to leave a fave! Appreciate always your sincere support truly
Date: 5/1/2025 5:32:00 PM
brilliant and creative, thanks poet
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:43:00 AM
Thank you dear Yann, appreciate your support
Date: 5/1/2025 5:29:00 PM
Really a breathtaking image - "spills rose sparks"
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:41:00 AM
Thank you dear paige so kind of you always
Date: 5/1/2025 4:53:00 PM
The little steps in clusters was a nice touch, swirly sweetness! <3
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, for your kind comment, grateful
Date: 5/1/2025 4:09:00 PM
A yoke of love holds form, facts of fate flirt with virgin freedom, embryo of a rose rises to the future of your hopes...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/1/2025 3:41:00 PM
Very nice hiku! It seems hiku is a haiku in shape format, moon curve in your hiku. Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much dear abdulla, hikus are fun! Grateful for your support
Date: 5/1/2025 1:15:00 PM
Very creative IE and a stunning image. Tom
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much dear tom always for your support
Date: 5/1/2025 12:04:00 PM
You've created a beautiful picture in this haiku.
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:39:00 AM
Thank you dear hilda! Grateful always
Date: 5/1/2025 12:01:00 PM
Beautiful haiku poem, dearest Ink. You probed the nature's ethereal beauty and converting force, focusing on lunar imaging and its fascinating influence on the natural world. The contrast of features such as "moon-flame," "rose sparkles," and "nocturnal nectar" implies a strong link between heavenly bodies and terrestrial events, outlining themes of love, beauty, and transcendence. My best wishes for the contest, offering you warm regards.
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so very much dr sotto for your unwavering support
Date: 5/1/2025 11:52:00 AM
How do you do this?! You make it look easy and like placing letters artfully could never be messy! I literally believe I have the two I've done only in me. If I manage a third then I'll thank you for the inspiration :)
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:38:00 AM
Haha its not really that easy, hikus are a bit harder for me than 300 words poems. But so grateful for your support. I bet you can write another excellent one again. Sending you light dear dd
Date: 5/1/2025 11:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your very creative "hiku" write. Great first line. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..........
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Date: 5/4/2025 10:38:00 AM
Thank you so much dear paula
Date: 5/1/2025 11:32:00 AM
Ink, is Hiku a legitimate form or a Strand dohickey? If it's legit... what the heck is the def?
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Date: 5/1/2025 11:51:00 AM
Hah awwn brian is a very innovative poet, and i really enjoy writing these. I keep accidentally typing to lioness hikey so she now calls it hiki. Lol thank you so much for your visit.
Date: 5/1/2025 11:17:00 AM
Moon flame spills … oooo that is gorgeous!!! Oooo caviar swirls !!! This hiki is absolutely stunning!!!
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Date: 5/1/2025 11:21:00 AM
Are u goin to stick to hiki papi lol thank u

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