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Nocturnal Excursions

childish dreams trip
     my sleepwalking soul-
is this how nightmares start?

dreamquestionku

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Sandra Haight

October 26, 2015 at 9:19 AM

So much to think about within so few words, David! Congrats on your win! Sandra

Viv Wigley

October 26, 2015 at 12:58 AM

Short and sharp,David,one of my favourites. Congratulations! regards, Viv

Andrea Dietrich

October 25, 2015 at 5:14 PM

wow, DAvid. I would put this way on top. One small one like this is so powerful. Amazing! Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison

October 25, 2015 at 3:22 PM

Dropping back with my congrats David:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

October 25, 2015 at 12:32 PM

This is an example of less being more. Congratulations!

David Mohn

October 25, 2015 at 6:47 PM

Thanks for the generous placement Richard :)

Paul Callus

October 23, 2015 at 12:19 PM

A delightful questionku, David. I see a winner! ~ Regards // paul

Jan Allison

October 20, 2015 at 1:14 PM

Love this one David - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

October 20, 2015 at 12:10 PM

I like this, too, David. Nightmares at any age are scary. ~ Lin ~

Rob Carmack

October 20, 2015 at 11:28 AM

Hey David, I like this. Good luck in the contest.

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