Nobody's Child

Her chapped palms smell of
-ungrateful jasmine-
roughened by shrewd plays of world.
And in the creases of
- youthful forehead-
sleeps an orphaned childhood, old.

Among distasteful leering,
ineffectual rags of
-modesty cries-
unfortunate beauty trapped among
-lechers-
pawn broker and hawker alike.

-Nobody’s Child -
gazes high UP , at the
  S
  K
  Y
  S
  C
  R
  A
  P
  E
  R
  S ,
elegant unreachable stairs
winding beyond clouds yonder. 

S L O W L Y sighing,
At the dreams hidden, on the dark side of
half bitten moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Misra Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Such a beautiful poem! I could totally relate to it as I've seen the Jasmine sellers in my locality. I have seen the young girls going old over the years. I've seen them selling hopes of erotic interludes to young lovers, and to older women who grasp at a memory of what once was. I've often wondered what the Jasmine seller thought and felt. Jasmine for her was probably a few morsels... Beautiful poem, Rajlakshmi. Loved every word so beautifully strung like that on a string of Jasmine flowers.
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April 19, 2015 at 6:53 PM
I stumbled across this gem again. Love it... LINDA
Ligon Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Longing for hope in the midst of tragedy. Uniquely written. This is the first time I've read a poem on this subject matter. Well expressed!
Bolden Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 8:57 AM
well done my friend.
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October 18, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Rajlakshmi:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
M V Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:19 PM
Well done,Rajalaksmi.Congrats!Hope you read my poem in the same winners list!Where are you from?
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Rajlakshmi. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:39 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Shines Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in the International contest!!!
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 6:22 PM
YES you see a real winner! and Free Verse! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 3:53 PM
as I read this one, it just got better and better and better. Love the way you showed a skyscraper with the "tall" word and your excellent final lines. Big congrats in the contest.
Babcock Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:42 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl
Williams Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Rajlakshmi, congratulations on your International win...David
Shines Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the Poetry Soup International Poetry Contest. it was simply very well written.loved your work.
Guzzi Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 6:53 PM
A most excellent touching, powerful write please DO enter it in my contest on the DARK. [Free Verse is a hard sell here I applaud you!] Congrad's on your fine write getting to round 1. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Rajlakshmi. Love, Carol
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 2:26 AM
GOOD poem I like it !!! oxox love Anne-Lise
Jones Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yep. fangs matter. nice write, thanks~N
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