Nobody

Nobody knows my pain, They only see my stain, Thinking i am of no gain, But i bet i will multiply like grain. CHARLES MELODY *lightning ink*

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J.R. Wren-Ingalls

Date: 12/28/2019 12:10:00 PM

Love this!

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/1/2019 5:29:00 AM

Charles...your poetic message shares your heart of wisdom and rejection accompanied by a never ending reaching for the stars!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/6/2019 10:59:00 AM

Thanks so much Chuck

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 4/13/2017 8:51:00 AM

Wow! I can really feel the pain. Nice poem!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 2/20/2018 7:24:00 AM

thank you

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/3/2017 4:45:00 PM

This gem is penned with immense emotion. Insha-Allah you shall free of all chains and those who look down on you shall berry their eyes in shame.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/4/2017 1:21:00 AM

thank u so much dear Afolabi. ur words, like a bed, lodging my soul.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2017 1:51:00 PM

Your poem has a remarkable, spiritual quality, Charles. It is almost like an innocent being persecuting and surviving to "multiply like grain." A thought-provoking and well composed verse!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/1/2017 2:54:00 PM

Thank you ma. You bought my thought. I lost my daughter on the 21 of november

Anil Deo

Date: 3/31/2017 6:33:00 PM

Brother, great rhyme & refrain, but without STAIN: you and the quatrain. In Jesus, break every chain, break every chain, BREAK EVERY CHAIN. Hallelujah, Under His Mighty Wings, amen. A.DEO

J.R. Wren-Ingalls
Date: 12/28/2019 1:19:00 PM

Amen! HE wants to give us fullness of life!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink
Date: 4/1/2017 1:48:00 AM

Oh! U made me cry sister Anil. u know my plight and where it pinches in my heart. thank u for being here. i appreciate with a hug. THANK YOU JESUS.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 3/31/2017 4:33:00 PM

Who buys my thoughts?

J.R. Wren-Ingalls
Date: 12/28/2019 1:18:00 PM

I think you answered this in you beautiful poem. Faith in your Higher Power is what will sustain you and cause you to multiply like grain! If it helps with encouragment, though, I buy these thoughts, because I have felt this way! Only God really sustains me, and the arm of flesh will always eventually fail me. Keep writing!