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Noble Beasts

The horse is a fascinating creature that serves us so well


Having had a life long relationship with horses
I am full of admiration for their endless toils.
They are fiery yet mainly gentle giants
and give hours of pleasure to their carers

I worked first as a working pupil
then in racing yards some flat but mainly jumping yards
going on to having my own stables
doing the show jumping circuit and some taming

I prefer the term taming to breaking in
it is all a matter of trust after all
why break a spirit? When with love
you get an unbreakable bond

Using this method I was able to school a horse
from wild to saddle in 2 to 3 weeks
then the real fun begins as you start
the real relationship of bringing it on

I had two people who taught me so much
when I was around 14 years old
we used to go in school holidays to the new forest
I told Maddie I wanted to become a show jumper

Now I was tiny about 4 foot 3 high
and she put me up on Yanta
he was 17 hands and a cat jumper
boy I had some spills over fences

Maddie's response was to take away my saddle
she said I needed to improve my seat and balance
well after many more spills it started working
and I became a burr on his back in total harmony

Later at 18 I started my training as a working pupil
training to be an instructor
now Heather was a tough cookie with quality horses
a formidable lady who took no excuses

She used to get us in the indoor school
taught us dressage and much more
some days she would remove both saddle and bridle
saying that a true rider steers with hands, knees and bodies

You riders try it some time once you can back up a horse
and do flying changes and shoulder ins and outs
without any tackle then you are a rider
at one with your horse in body and soul

One of my pleasures has always been night riding
the horse is a prey animal and prone to flight
they get up on their toes and spook at shadows
riding without a saddle means you can feel each muscle tense
getting a sense of when they are ready to whirl and flee
leaving the unwary rider on the ground eating dust.

These two ladies shaped my life with horses
giving me insight into them and their needs
a sense of wonder and awe at their trust
and their willingness to work with us

Be they an Arab or thoroughbred or plain Jane
each one teaches us so much as we interact
there is nothing more heart warming than
a horse nickering to you delighted you are there
shaking and tossing their heads stamping the ground
impatient for you to stroke and caress them
giving you comfort when you are down
and joy when you are up and excited

Now no longer able to ride due to a bad hip
I still share a close bond and delight
when I call to horses in a field
and they come at a charge to greet me
it is the simple things that give the most pleasure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/23/2014 3:50:00 PM
How sad you can no longer enjoy it. I too have a bad hip now and I can't roller skate or even walk a really long time like I used to do. This is great description of the way you learned to tame horses. I enjoyed the way you explain why it is not good to say "break their spirit" and how you discussed the importance of riding "free" so you could really sense what they are feeling. Awesome.
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Date: 6/9/2014 3:25:00 PM
Hi Shadow: A beautiful poem of your experience with horses. From the manner of the poem, I could see that you were given a divine gift to know those majestic animals. Also, congratulations on your bawdy win and thanks for your comment on mine.
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Date: 6/9/2014 9:44:00 AM
Good morning Shadow. I enjoyed rereading this one.
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your story in poetic form about your love and relationship with horses..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/9/2014 2:10:00 AM
Very interesting and wonderful story. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/7/2014 11:36:00 PM
Dear Shadow, I can tell you have a special relationship with horses by this incredible poem. They are a love of mine too and though I haven't ridden for several years now, I miss the feeling of freedom I feel when I get to ride. They are a blessing on this earth and our forefathers would have never survived without their help. A wonderful poem! I have done healing on horses and other animals with Reiki.
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Date: 6/7/2014 4:27:00 PM
a lovely write about lovely creatures - thanks, my friend, loved the contest
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Date: 6/6/2014 12:27:00 PM
This is just wonderful Linda 'Horse Whisperer' Hamilton! I hope California Chrome gets it done in the Belmont Stakes...A triple crown winner is long overdue...Also, thank you for the win in your Scary Moments contest and I am SO glad I entered - Tim
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/6/2014 1:00:00 PM
Ooops...Thought that was your reply! (I'm SO embarassed)
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/6/2014 12:57:00 PM
Well, you beat me to the punch Linda! I just Soup Mailed you the lyrics and yes, it is one of my all-time favs too...NEVER get tired of hearing it. I recently had the pleasure of watching her perform it on a local TV station at a concert at Southeastern University in Hammond LA...
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/6/2014 12:36:00 PM
Speaking of night riding, have you ever heard the song 'Let That Pony Run' by Pam Tillis? one of my all-time favs...
Date: 6/6/2014 12:09:00 PM
What an interesting and wonderful story. A horse whisper in our group of poets. I'm glad you "became a burr on the horse's back". Animals big or small give so much content and happiness in lives of humans. Thanks for sharing this epic life of your. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/6/2014 9:52:00 AM
What a great story. Yours sounds like a life well lived.
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