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Noah’s Symphony

Turn around and you’ll see 360 degrees. Tipsy or dizzy, dazzled and unbalanced. Jumping over the obvious, skipping. It’s groovy how you can can, over and over again, become one with the shellac or polyvinyl. Its circumference everlasts, but the spin is slow or fast. Some ride high but scratch and waste the singsong space, the sizzling stellar and crucial becomes psychedelic. Two feet planted on the recording, soaring. Sore their plantar, blistered by the hiss. Do resist the shake and shiver of insane. Tears ruin the score…Noah’s symphony.

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Date: 11/12/2024 3:52:00 PM
What a hard place to be- wow, Kim- what you come up with!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2024 4:49:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! xx
Date: 11/11/2024 6:14:00 PM
Absolutely intriguing, Kim! I can only echo the complimentary comments below. Hurrah! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2024 7:06:00 PM
I appreciate you, my friend! ~ Kim
Date: 11/10/2024 9:46:00 AM
your melodic piece captures the poignant tunes from the octaves of life...lovely. Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Nette!
Date: 11/10/2024 8:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative write. "Good Luck" if for a contest...  Have a fun day/week writing away.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/10/2024 12:54:00 AM
Such a wonderful depiction of like you cleverly titled "Noah's Symphony." How clever is that? Thanks Kim for this lovely poem of yours...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Date: 11/9/2024 11:38:00 PM
Wow. An awesome final phrase on this intriguing poem. Goodnight, Kim, my last poet of the night!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 6:22:00 AM
Thanks for including me before you hit the pillow :)
Date: 11/9/2024 7:20:00 PM
music bring me tears very often, may be Noah travelled on a sea of tears ? enjoyed yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 6:23:00 AM
Perhaps so…did he grieve. Now, makes me think forward to the weight upon the shoulders of him and his family. Trusting God, yes, but perhaps grieving mankind…but that he would have known this wickedness would present itself over and over, covered by our Savior. Bless you, Yann!
Date: 11/9/2024 7:04:00 PM
Records have many voices. Some screech a bit. I like your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2024 6:25:00 AM
Thanks, Hilda! I miss those days of old. Today it’s easier to play our favorites but in the past it was like receiving candy as a reward. Blessings, dear one!

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