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Noah - First Place Contest Winner

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Noah heard God's revelation clearly. To build an ark is to persevere dearly. For sinners mocked and taunted him, Yet steadfastly, he did not flee or whim. For 120 years, he worked on the ark, trusting in God and his unwavering mark.  He preached and warned of the coming rain,  but the people ignored it, living life in vain. Drifting on water for forty days, earth was taken As they drove, Noah's heart remained unshaken. God blessed Noah's faithfulness and obedience. A new start and an everlasting vow of providence.

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Date: 7/5/2023 11:07:00 AM
Congrats and high fives Lasaad! You did a marvelous job recounting Noah's story in twelve lines articulating with elegance and Noah's story. You have a wonderful ability to make rhymes work for you especially in this well known story giving it a fresh face like a new world! Blessings dear friend! So glad to see this at the top of the winners list.
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Date: 7/4/2023 8:44:00 PM
A fantastic rendering of Noah's story, Sotto! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/3/2023 3:29:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 7/3/2023 12:38:00 AM
A picturesque illustration of Noah. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/2/2023 11:45:00 PM
Wonderful story of Noah presented with clarity, Sotto, congratulations on top win:)
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Date: 6/14/2023 8:59:00 AM
A wonderful write/story/picture on Noah. "Good Luck." I enjoyed reading it. Yes, we both did a Noah write. Have a great/blessed day.........................
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Date: 6/13/2023 9:46:00 AM
Well penned...Sotto. Sometimes some people ignore the truth and ending up into troubles. Truth blesses me the most. This is why , I speak it daily.
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