CayCay Godwin Poet Dizain

NO WORDS TRITE

Darling, you are my gift, my treasured gold.
        I braved pain once that our joy might reach crest, 
            So, now for said joy’s passion, answer bold
                  amour's question born from my heart’s own chest:
                      As love’s keen ache, will you crave me with zest?

                      No words trite on this sentiment may lay.
                  Just love words eloquent may our love say.
            Such happy promise dances to please us
       As Cupid’s quest quivers are aimed your way:

Will my bliss know your shot of lust, kissed thus?

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Jannie Breedt January 23, 2017 at 10:35 PM CONGRATULATIONS Cay cay. A dizain indeed! You will have to teach me again. And then there was that last line ....It arrives home right between the eyes. I am so proud of you.

Sara Kendrick January 21, 2017 at 11:53 AM Congrats on your first place!! Way to go..Sara

Reason A. Poteet January 21, 2017 at 11:28 AM Oh how I love the dizain. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2017 at 8:08 AM Congrats, CayCay!

Roy Pett January 21, 2017 at 1:53 AM Congratulations CayCay, Inspirational piece of poetry, well deserved to be top poem.

Andrea Dietrich January 20, 2017 at 7:49 PM Caycay, take a BOW, lovely lady!! Top of the podium win! A lovely dizain from you. And the layout is so pretty! Congrats.

Arthur Vaso January 20, 2017 at 2:43 PM So romantic Cay Cay, :) Hugs

Joanna Daniel January 18, 2017 at 8:09 AM This is a winner for me, CayCay:) a 7:) beautiful dizain on love:)

Connie Marcum Wong January 17, 2017 at 6:34 PM Wow CayCay, impressive! I have never written or heard of this form. I hope it does great in the contest! I know you will have a beautiful Valentine's Day! 7 ; )

Judy Ball January 15, 2017 at 7:22 PM Lovely Cay Cay. So soft and warm. There is great feeling in this. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Sandra Haight January 15, 2017 at 7:22 PM Such a beautifully written Dizain, CayCay. Excellent meter, rhyme and sentiments. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden January 15, 2017 at 6:03 PM ADORE this one ... and I love this form. I am unfamiliar with the names of most forms, but hoping to learn. Love this form and mostly what you've done with it ... the lilt and metre. Keep up the great work!

Alexis Y. January 15, 2017 at 8:50 AM Hi CayCay, You penned such a beautiful write. I found it to be romantic and honest. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. :-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2017 at 6:47 AM - A beautiful poem CayCay - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)