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No Words

“God, or someone, had parted the sea, and who were we to say we weren't going to walk through it?” (Moniza Alvi) I have no words for this: The way we climbed this stack of stone - how sun and shadow chased each other and the old tar road that had carried us from the city to your cottage and now here lay far below us: Black and sluggish, like the carelessly abandoned skin of a long dead snake. I have no words for this: How silent it was – how sharply we could see the few surrounding villages, the meadows and the woods, the soft and subtle rise and fall of all the hills around us: And how unimportant everything beyond the distance of your touch. I have no words for this, my love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/28/2016 8:07:00 AM
JAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 8:52:00 AM
Jan, thank you for sharing, enjoyed the poem. SKAT
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:42:00 PM
This is amazingly beautiful Jan. And the quote is priceless! :)
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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