No Words

“God, or someone, had parted the sea, and who were we
to say we weren't going to walk through it?”
                                                                (Moniza Alvi)



I have no words for this:

The way we climbed this stack of stone -
how sun and shadow chased each other
and the old tar road that had carried us
from the city to your cottage and now here
lay far below us: Black and sluggish,
like the carelessly abandoned skin
of a long dead snake.

I have no words for this:

How silent it was – how sharply
we could see the few surrounding villages,
the meadows and the woods,
the soft and subtle rise and fall
of all the hills around us: And
how unimportant everything
beyond the distance of your touch.

I have no words for this, my love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 8:22 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:07 AM
JAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Jan, thank you for sharing, enjoyed the poem. SKAT
Shahwan Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 7:42 PM
Beautiful poem.
Gumbo Avatar
May 17, 2009 at 7:42 PM
This is amazingly beautiful Jan. And the quote is priceless! :)
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