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My blood sugar drops./ No longer in tip top shape. In a dazed state, I underrate the truth in every word./ I wish my song was as beautiful as that of a birds./ And my connection to the earth, was as strong as that of a worms./ We live our lives afraid of germs: microscopic beings we can't disturb./ Unable to control that which is not seen./ Irradiating the seeds to everything green, so that when the heart of a child sings, they won't know what it means./ They've been transformed into spritually impaired sentient beings. In love with superficial things./ Blinded by the idea that love resides in a pair of expensive gold rings./ Deaf to the lullaby that mother earth sings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/29/2009 4:32:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 4/29/2009 1:03:00 PM
Nice work Brooke, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 2:50:00 PM
Brooke, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann,
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:18:00 AM
Brooke, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!
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Date: 4/27/2009 9:22:00 AM
Congrats Brooke on your free verse being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 5:28:00 PM
Best wishes, and Congratulations on having your poem featured this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:35:00 PM
Hi Brooke, lovely poem. Anyway, congrats my friend on your featured poem. Mine is also featured this week. Ernilando
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